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I realized something… None of you guys know about my newest WIP… right?
Ahem…
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Since I have returned… I am going to tell you all about my newest WIP! I have put all of my other WIPs on hold! Or I have scrapped them. To create…My Murder Mystery!
It is my current work! I have all 18 characters! I have the setting. I have the plot! I have action! climax! Moral! Villains! Heroes! Death! Murder! And it takes place in World War III in the future. (But not far in the future. Like a couple of years from now future) Let me introduce you to the characters!
Daxon Coffin- Daxon is the main character. He was training to be a professional survivalist. He is close with his cousins, Shelby Coffin. He is from America and was in Britain to train in Wannless University. (It’s said you can achieve any dream job by attending Wannless. Daxon is 20 years old. Daxon is more straightforward and takes longer to think of answers. He usually comes up with one the next day. He is a little slow in the head but it usually helps him think more logically.
Shelby Coffin- She is also attending Wannless. She is Daxon’s cousin and closest friend. Shelby’s dream is to become a stunt double, which Wannless is helping her with. She is 19 years old. Shelby is honest and speaks her mind. She usually has something to say, and is a little pushy. She’s also from America.
Mina Luscus- She is a military personal. She was sent to rescue the characters from the bombed location. Wannless University. She is kind but strict and keeps to rules. But is also a little controlling. She is 29 years old and is a major in the British Army. (This takes place in Britain.) She moved there from Germany.
Yusri Amika- Yusri is a more reclusive person attending Wannless (Spoiler… all of these characters besides Mina attend Wannless (Maybe Icarus if I change it)). She is practicing to be a moirologists. (A professional mourner. Someone who cries for the dead even if they don’t know them. Or they give eulogies and speeches and such) Which is ironic since she shows little emotion and tends to be quiet. But she is an amazing actor, which is why she took up moirology. She is 21 years old and Polish.
Icarus Dunn- Icarus is training to be a pilot. But he’s also trying to get a college degree. He is the only real United Kingdom citizen in the book, him being Scottish. He is 22 and about to graduate. He is a strict character who sticks to the rules but is also compassionate caring for others’ emotions. His best friend is Xaiden, but he generally makes friends where ever he goes. He can cheer people up even in a time like a bombing.
Xaiden Raw- Xaiden is Canadian, and training to be a food designer/chef. He is great friends with Icarus and usually picks fights with people who try to mess with him (Icarus doesn’t mind when people make fun of him) Xaiden is 20 and a very intense person. He lives life through risks and picks fights with basically everyone. He is a little harsh but at least he’s honest. Because of his risks he was able to create some of his signature dishes. (But most of his “risks” end up in the trash.)
(I have a lot more character! But those are just the first few I introduced to you!! I have to go to homeroom soon lol so I’ma submit this and continue if anyone’s interested!… If not… I don’t care. I’ll pull down your underwear >:[ lolllllllllll anyway! God bless talk soon XD Even if people don’t care I’m still gonna post on here)
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hmmmm we need more moderators on Kingdom Pen I think…
@the_lost-journal cool!!
oh yeah also the moderators…..idk what happened to them. they just kinda disappeared.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
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Thanks! Since I have nothing to do i’ma continue listing out my characters! ?
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Samit Perdita- Samit is a party magician. She’s an interesting character because she doesn’t believe in any religion. She is more superstitious. She is Brazilian and 21. She is very kind and naive to most things. She also miss uses a lot of idioms.
Damla Luna- Damla is Greek 19 year old girl. She is practicing to be a deep sea diver. Damla is a bit of a coward, and is often bullied by Zoe and Wren. But Damla is very compassionate. She tries to help anyway she can. Sometimes ruining evidence just trying to help.
Wren Manco- Wren is an overly patriotic American. She shoves it in people’s face how proud she is to be an American. She is a pop star, and the only reason she’s in college is to fill out her parents’ wish. Her parents just wanted her to have a college degree, and she wanted to make her parents proud. She is often a jerk except to Shelby and Daxon, just because they’re American.
Cannenta Moacir- Cannnenta is known as one of the world’s best bakers! She grew up in Portugal. She can speak English, Portuguese, and Spanish (Side note… I should probably mention they all can speak English. Some better than others XD) She is best friends with Gigi and is fairly kind to most. She is very pretty but also very vain. She is 23 years old. About to graduate.
Orion Evermore- Orion is from South Korea, is father is American. Hence the name. His real name is Orihyun Evermore, but he goes by Orion since it’s simpler to say. He is 20 years old and practicing to be a taxidermist. He loves to hunt and ironically also loves animals. He collects different rings to represent his favorites. He can be a bit rude and awkward around strangers, but he also can be fun once he warms up to you. He is great friends with Zoe.
Adit Miku- Adit is Japanese and studying archeology. He has a bit too much pride in his masculinity. Often being ruder to the girls. He isn’t very kind. But he does help other people out. And although he doesn’t say it, he can warm up to certain people. And he can care for others. But mainly he’s a jerk. Oh! He’s 23 by the way.
Camillus Wanless- Camillus (Cam for short) Is a 22 year old Italian. He is super kind to others, often understanding of their emotions. He tries to help anyway he can, especially with the mechanics. Since he is studying engineering. Camillus isn’t afraid to let his emotions or feelings show, but he doesn’t let them get hold of him. He usually takes up the job as leader whenever he can. His main struggle is just letting people take control.
@the_lost-journal I love that there’s a pilot named Icarus, lol. I wonder if he realizes how unfortunate his name is.
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Looks interesting! I am currently doing a few things:
-Adjusting to 10th grade (nightmare. Pray lol)
-Breathing 24/7
So I have no time.
Just kidding, I have time. I’ll be reading!
Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.
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YESSSSS you realized! Almost all of their names are puns! I love to have my characters with names that mean something. When I was naming them I thought… “Ya know… he’s a pilot. It’d be really fun to name him Icarus.” And then that sparked me to name all of them pun names. Usually my characters names have something to do with them. For example:
Leander’s name means lion, and he’s a Paradalis cat person XD
Rapha’s name means healer- and she’s the princess of the throne of healers
Cassius means empty or no emotions. Arnan means joy or glee. And Trisan means sorrow! And that all fits their characters.
For some characters, like Xaiden, he’s a cook! But his last name happens to be a chef’s worst nightmare- their food being raw. And Adit is an archeologist. But Miku means future! And Wanless means luckless hopeless or despair. And that’s basically the opposite of his character! Also fun fact… Samit was originally going to be a collector. But they don’t really teach that in colleges XD that’s why her first name means collected. And her last name means lost or ruin.
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-Adjusting to 10th grade (nightmare. Pray lol)
You and me both ?
-Breathing 24/7
:0 I have not tried that yet! Is it fun?
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Here is the last row of characters!
Gigi Eno- Gigi is a Canadian who is studying to be a therapist. She is the most compassionate out of the group and hears everyone’s side. She often stays out of fights and tries to calm people down. Especially since they’re all trapped. She is best friends with Cannenta and they often are seen together. Gigi is 24. She does have a bit of a problem, which is talking about some people’s confessions to Cannenta. Ironic isn’t it?
Zoe Taggart- Besides Wren, Zoe is definitely the bully of the group. She makes fun of peoples’ stereotypes and mocks them. She often goes after Damla because she’s weaker. Zoe is working to be a biologist. But she mainly wants to be a snake milker. Just like Orion, she has an unexpected love for animals. And often treats them better. What’s so ironic about her is she’s the most Irish person you could meet. She picks all the fights, she has red hair which she dyes black so that she doesn’t get made fun of. She often goes out drinking at bars on a Saturday night. She’s very stereotypical. She’s 21.
Zimri Sourd- Zimri is becoming a wedding planner, he is from Egypt and grew up there. He moved to Britain when he was 15, and people often say he was “white washed” because he acts more like a British person than an Egyptian. Zimri is 20 and is very good with woman (lol). He is fairly popular with the girls, but he is in love with Cannenta. (which Cannenta doesn’t return the love DX lol) He is very charismatic… but like Cannenta very vain. He often spends a lot of time on his appearance.
Finally…
Corbin Luscus- He is Mina’s brother. A true German at heart… Meaning he’s very rude. LOL jk not all German’s are rude XD. Anyway! He is very strict and silent. You’d think he’s the older sibling. He is nothing like Mina, often judging the survivors and being a little too harsh. He is 26 and Mina is always so happy that she just so happened to be stationed at the same base as her younger brother. Corbin on the other hand isn’t. There is one small character quirk though… it’s not even noticeable!… Corbin is a fascist.
(Yeah… It’ll make sense once I start to explain the story!)
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Wren is an overly patriotic American. She shoves it in people’s face how proud she is to be an American.
she sounds like Soldier lol
I like the new characters! You have a lot!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
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she sounds like Soldier lol
lol I looked it up! I never knew Soldier was patriotic XD
I like the new characters! You have a lot!
Danke! There’s still so much I have with them that I want to share! Like their descriptions! Or how Daxon hates being rich so that’s why he spends all his time in nature. Or how Cannenta doesn’t really trust guys because she was cheated on! Or how Camillus cares for Damla because she reminds him of his sister. Or how Damla gets jealous of others when Camillus cares for others. Or how Yusri takes giant risks, which usually causes the others to be put in danger, just for fun. Or how Wyatt’s parents are horrible to him and pressure him and have even not fed him for getting a B+. Or how… One of them gets murdered! And how 6 of them (not including Corbin) Are fascist spies… OoOoOoOoOoOps! DID I say that out loud?!
@the_lost-journal yep very patriotic!
also that is……intriguing!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
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hehehehehe i’ma let you guys guess who you think they are as I continue sharing more and more of the story!!!
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