@writefury
Active 8 years, 9 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper Noice. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Right here.
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@Ethryndal I LOVE IT. O.o Now I have to pick which version is the best. Yay. I like the first one best, with the phrasing of all the stuff, but as you’ve already been told and are fixing, it’s too long and gives away too much information. Sooo…
I think I like the first one in your latest post best, but with these differences: keep this version…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus WHAHOO!
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Emma Flournoy posted an update 8 years, 5 months ago
@Ethryndal Yo, look at this. https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/how-to-write-funny/ I dunno. Just because. XD Was it really as bad as your first impression? I mean, is there any possibility it would be better upon second watching?
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@ingridrd Oooh, ice cream. This is the best book launch ever. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@Ethryndal definitely better. I love it just how it is, but as Daeus mentioned, you might cut out the first bit about her step-sister without any damage and probably with benefits.
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Daeus replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@ethryndal Like normal, I love the voice you use.
You might keep a long version like this for use on your blog, but if you’re going to use this on a sales page or book cover, yeah, it needs to be short.
You can probably make the point about her being heroine material shorter and cut out the part about her step-sister
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Ingrid replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@ethryndal *wiggles eyebrows* I wanna read it…although, I feel like I’ve just read the whole book. 😉 It is a tad too long, but that’s nothing a little editing can’t fix. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@sam-kowal I can see how it must be fun to have Stan as a dragon. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@Ethryndal your sneaking suspicion is absolutely correct, but otherwise this is absolutely brilliant.
Seriously, and I almost forgave it for being too long because all of it was awesome. So yeah. It’s good. *vigorous nodding*
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Ingrid replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus *highfive* And just for good measure……
🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Um…sorry, Stan. You can’t eat him. 😛
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Thanks everyone. 😀  I really enjoyed writing it.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus I already said this, but congratulations. 😉
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Daeus started the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
I can’t believe I’ve forgotten to announce this so far.
I have a new book out! http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-golden-ziggurat/
@lady-iliara @theacornman @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @dedreel @sam-kowal @water-lilly @introvert_girl @supermonkey42 @seekjustice @0-0enyalio0-0 @everyone-else
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Daeus replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Violators will be required to read The Count Of Monte Cristo.
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Daeus replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Not watching something is not a crime. Only not eating ice cream.
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Ingrid posted an update 8 years, 5 months ago
Well, I’m back.
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WHY DOES EVERYONE LOVE IT SO MUCH??? *pulls hair* I swear, it wasn’t just a picky first impression. *freaks out* It wasn’t. IT WASN’T! I’m generally the less picky one in our family, to be honest, but we ALL (even dad, who doesn’t give a hoot for story structure) thought it was bad.
Arg.
Granted, it wasn’t ALL horrible. There are a lot of things…[Read more]
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Being the supportive friend that I am, I find this all quite hilarious. What’s good at this point is, since I haven’t seen it, I happily can’t disagree with you. 😀 So I’ll take your word for it. *best Edmund accent* “Wul, I believe you.”
*stares* “You do?”
“Sure! Remember the time I told you about the football field in the bathroom cupboard?”…[Read more]
Just… just… MEAN. *pathetic sniffling* You don’t care about me.
Do be aware though that Edmund was totally wrong in that scene, since there actually WAS a land in the wardrobe, so you’re not really promoting your case any.
See who’s smirking now. *smirks*
*is horribly defensive* I DO SO! *pathetic sniffling*
*smirks* Of course. Edmund is usually totally wrong. Until we see him in Prince Caspian, and then he’s one of the only right ones. And then we get to VotDT, and he’s mostly wrong again. Blergh.
But YOU must be aware that that first smirk was Edmund’s, not mine. His necessary smirk for the…[Read more]