Rosey Mucklestone

@aislinn-mollisong 😀 Okay. I’m working on it.

@ethryndal I love that Knights of Ren idea. I honestly haven’t had much of a clue as to what’s going to happen in episode 9 — which is awesome — but I think that would work really well if it turned out to be so.

@dekreel It’s pretty cool, though I haven’t done anything with group boards yet. #plansforthisweek 🙂

Okay, I actually did this thing. 😀 I’m now on Pinterest posting writing tips.

https://www.pinterest.com/excelsiorwritingschool/pins/

Hmm. I don’t know who would be interested in this. Here are some random tags. 🙂

@anne-of-lothlorien @seekjustice @graciegirl @mariposa @winter-rose @jenwriter17 @inkling-for-christ @christi-eaton @epicaddie2

@inkling-for-christ

Yeah, what @sam-kowal said. 😛

All KeePers and Kapeefers alike, I can also seriously recommend this course. Click it. Sign up. Do the thing.

@Winter-rose perfect. 🙂

@inkling-for-christ First person and third person really aren’t that different. Mood setting descriptions, body language, sensations — they all still work. If you have trouble telling in a first person story, it seems you have a telly-y narrator. If your narrator is constantly telling how he/she feels or giving too much information about the…[Read more]

@winter-rose eh… close enough. ;P

@jenwriter17 well first of all, I must have somehow missed your introduction cuz I don’t remember saying hello. Hello, and welcome. 😉 I’m an old timer here, but I haven’t been around much lately due to crazy life. I’m so pleased to see new faces filling in.

Writing goals… *whimpering laugh*

Oh boy.

1. FINALLY get the third draft of the book…

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@Winter-Rose nineteen this coming March… how close are we? 😛

@inkling-for-christ Haha! 😀 I don’t think I’ve ever seen a “show don’t tell” review before. Good job.

@Winter-Rose ooh I love it. The others have said my thoughts basically, but I would echo that yes, my first impression was that it was a little long, so if you could cut down some of it, it might be better.

@mariposa *chokes on her left-over Christmas gingerbread and faints into the eggnog*

Oh wow… I… I don’t even know what to say…

@Winter-Rose I love how you tied it together at the beginning and end; nice work. 😀

Overall, I think it’s pretty strong. I do think you could cut this one line: Before he can drop the mission killers close in, confronting him with a choice. Will he run from the men who want Amy dead, or will he remain and risk repeating a past defeat he wishes…[Read more]

@winter-rose *props chin on fist and looks up at you with enormous, adoring brown eyes* When I grow up, I wanna write like you.

That. Was. Awesome.

@dragon-snapper I am neck-deep in school assignments right now and wading through a pile of books I desperately want to read, so at the present moment I’m afraid I’ll have to decline. I’m glad you have enough though! Sorry I didn’t reply sooner- for some reason email kicked it into spam, even though I thought I fixed that. *scowls at technology in…[Read more]

@Introvert_girl good question. I haven’t given this a ton of thought, but my gut says you would have to acknowledge to the reader that this is different.

You can’t let the new characters try to fill the shoes of the old ones; it won’t work. You should make it clear that this is their story now… and that the world has changed to need them as…[Read more]

@sam-kowal Great story! You seriously need to be an author. No joke.

I have to worry though that I’m going to get fat with all the ice cream I eat in these stories. 😛

@bethanysinkyroses heyyyyyyy, welcome back! I was wondering where you went. 😀