@writefury
Active 7 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
- Total Posts: 467
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@His-Instrument Aaahh, you too. Many times over. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Choppy Writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@Dragon-snapper yeah. They said it. 😛
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Daeus replied to the topic Choppy Writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@dragon-snapper I’m not really an expert on this, but the thing that’s helped me most is mixing things up — variety.
Variety in sentence length. I like to mix long, short, and medium sentences in a fairly even blend.
Variety in sentence openers. Too many subject openers in a row can get choppy. Try to throw in some -ings,…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@his-instrument Ah, that’s awesome. 🙂 I’m very proud of you.
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Daeus replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy *SLAP* That was for Loki
@dekreel Oh, thanks. Yes, I am friendly to everyone. lol. Perfect timing. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
Loki is skeptical.
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Daeus replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy It’s sap 2.0. It’s the sap of the new age. Loki would drink it.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic What's Your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper *headdesks* :’D
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic What's Your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@Dragon-snapper *shakes head* Welp, I mean, you just destroyed my story… everything was on that computer… so I guess you’ll never read it… too bad…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic What's Your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@Daeus …’sappy maple syrup…’?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic What's Your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@Dragon-snapper. No one. Touches. My. Computer.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic What's Your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
Newsflash… my computer decided it wasn’t doing gifs today…
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Daeus replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@his-instrument For your encouragement on my first book and for writing one of my favorite 1st person POV narrators. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic What's Your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic What's Your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
Aaaaand the gif is not moving and just looks weird… XD
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Corissa Maiden of Praise replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
Aww, thanks so much @kate-flournoy. You’re awesome too! 😀 <3
…and now I’m in the same boat as @daeus. Can’t I just tag everyone? 😛
Well, since I can’t, let’s see… maybe I’ll try for some folks who haven’t been on in awhile, just to let them know we’re still thinking about them and missing them.
I tag…
@joy-schmidt for being a fun…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic What's Your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@dragon-snapper You can’t eat my second favorite throne. It’s mine!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic What's Your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy *drinks some sappy maple syrup*
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