Rosey Mucklestone

Because the people in my mind are too awesome to ignore.

That turned out well! Good job, guys.
Hey, we could do this with a short story next…

Oh, of course. Always that. XP

It’s usually my way of winding down from writing a really tense scene.
It works very well. Though my siblings usually wonder why I’m laughing so hard. XD

Ditto Hope. 🙂
Oh, Mr. Batson’s thing reminded me. You guys need this: http://plot-generator.co.uk/

When your little siblings write fanfics of your books

My sibs don’t do that yet. But they play games and were playing multiple games of acting out my stories. Which was totally adorable.

You know you’re a writer when you have to break up a fight between your siblings of who’s going to play the favorite character. 😛

I’ve not really all out cried at a book before. But the Peleg Chronicles made me tear up at a few moments.
I’ve cried at a couple movies, though. Maybe the visuals get me. 😛

@the happy bookaholic
You know you’re a writer when you feel horrible for misspelling something. 😉

LOVE this poem. o_O Wow. Great job, Sarah!
I don’t have a lot to correct, but there’s one line:

rangers in a world abounding with royals,

It’s a good line, but I just think it could be a little better. The start of “rangers in a world…” could be taken a lot of places, and not all authors write medieval fiction. 😛

Here’s mine: http://writefury.wordpress.com
Now you know the cause of my username. 😛
@hannah w: I’ll be hosting a giveaway on thursday, too. It must be giveaway week. 😉

Wow. Great job, Kate! You had a great rhythm going throughout the whole thing that was really awesome.
I noticed the same part Daeus did, and I think I know what was my problem there.
You kind of have the beat going like “bum BUM bum BUM bum BUM”. Accentuating every other syllable at a pace you can nod your head to.
It sorta broke at the part:…[Read more]

Don’t make love just HAPPEN. They should like each other for who they are as people BEFORE jumping into all the love stuff. A lot of books skip the “good friends” phase that is almost always there.
It has to make sense with both your characters and what they’ve been proven to do in certain situations. If it doesn’t you’ll just end up ticking off…[Read more]

“Though sometimes we do question ‘why?'”

Interesting idea… though to some people it might be seen as almost cheating. Because in giving yourself a certain set POV, you’re setting yourself rules to work with. There’s a certain satisfaction to making a scene work in a POV that it’s hard it work in.
Not sure if your average reader would have issues reading that sort of thing, but I have…[Read more]

The good thing about 1st person is that you get to know your MC really well and see everything through their eyes. But if you have a large cast and want to switch views occasionally, that might not be the best thing.
I like 3rd person better for most things, but 1st is more to-the-point.
What aspects do you have to this book? Is it more one…[Read more]