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@Dragon-snapper oh wow! XD Good job! And do enlist me if you ever want it read/critiqued. (Because I want to see this King Daeus and Josiah-frog and ice-cream thing XP)

I got two chapters edited!!! Yay! I’m so happy about that. 😀

@Kate-Flournoy ah nice. XD I get that one too.

@Kate-Flournoy sounds like my life. I’m my sister’s call-on model most of the time. 😛

@Kina-Lamb goodnight!! *gives you pillows and blankets*

@Dragon-snapper goodness. XD I really must read this thing.
Josiah and a frog could be terrifying. xP

@Daeus aha! I have discovered your secret identity as the evil overlord of ice-cream.

*pictures @Daeus with a crown, and a cape, sitting on a throne being an evil overlord and eating ice-cream*

@Dragon-snapper Daeus as king…sounds fun. xD

@daeus cool! I’m still editing.

@winter-rose That’s super! Thanks for accompanying me! 😀
I just accidentally invented another sci fi weapon/gun to use in my trilogy. Oops. Don’t know how that happened. xP

@dragon-snapper *waves* Welcome!!

@ethryndal Aw. 🙁 *sends a gift of pizza after you*

Aw. 🙁 *sends a gift of pizza after you*

@winter-rose Yay! *teleports in a flash of blue to go edit more*

@winter-rose if you’re still going, I’m editing my WIP currently. 😀

Oh yes yes this is a good idea. My spring writing goals are…

– Plot out the finale of my trilogy (I need to do that this month)
– Write book three in April/Camp NaNoWriMo
– Finish editing (2nd draft) book #1 and send it to one or two Alpha readers
– Run away screaming in panic as they read my precious mess of nonsense

Reading:

– Creating…[Read more]

@Dragon-snapper alrighty. I’m writing a trilogy (not finished the last book yet) that’s Dystopian/Sci-Fi so I’d like to think I know what I’m doing. But actually I don’t have a clue. 😀

In my trilogy I have a lot of Holograms, Hovering machines and some plasma/laser guns/bullets. For things like that it’s best to have a normal modern thing -for…[Read more]

@aratrea thank you again for the help. 🙂 I’ll definitely be playing around with different ideas, and I do have two characters that should be able to fill the Saruman/Gollum position with a bit of tweaking.

@overcomer no problem! I hope it’s helpful. 🙂

@overcomer Alrighty I managed to grab enough time to read and give it an edit over. I did it in a google doc, so hopefully it works. I’ll link to it, and you should be able to see what I’ve suggested and accept/reject said edit suggestions.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16jNPsx_TyzVFKnVbbBRcaITZK3x85NNkgf8kNLyWrZc/edit?usp=sharing

*hopes it works*