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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 8 years, 1 month ago
@emma-flournoy Okay so you really made me wonder whether or not to see Braveheart. I heard that it’s a great story but it does seem to have a lot of issues. About feminism: I hate Leia. I dislike the Star Wars movies but Leia especially. And I love Eowyn. She’s boss. So I totally get your point. However, I am a feminist. Not the crazy type that…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 8 years, 1 month ago
@sarah-h I think you like movies about serious issues. And that’s good, I guess. You’ve mentioned movies about abortion, human trafficking, and school shootings. Wow.
Anyway, as far as historical movies go the Great Escape is one of the great World War II movies. At least in my opinion. It’s about a group of POWs escaping a German concentration…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 8 years, 1 month ago
@bluejay Yeah, I can see your point. Maybe it’s just that War Room was a lot like the other ones that they’ve made so I got a little bored. But the movie does have a powerful message. The Sons of Katie Elder is supposedly really good. Of course, it’s a John Wayne movie that’s directed by Henry Hathaway and the music is by Elmer Bernstein! So you…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Leviathan in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
Show don’t tell is famous in fiction in general. Like all the writing books (irritatingly) say that.
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 8 years, 1 month ago
@daeus Never heard of the hudsucker proxy. I’ll check it out.
@timothy-young I like How to Train Your Dragon 2 but I prefer the original. Better story. Sequel is a bit predictable in my opinion. But both are amazing.
@ingridrd Harry Potter! Yaass!
@hope I watched Inkheart a few years back and I remember really liking it. Has an amazing, unique…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Help Me, Help You, Help…er…The World? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
I haven’t submitted something for publication by kingdompen for a long time, but last time I did I experienced a really long wait time beween submission and publication (two months I think). I was fifteen so I got a little irritated when my article had to be published later during a month where it had absolutely nothing to do with that month’s…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Hi. in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
@sleepwalkingMK Welcome! I’m an MK too. But I was born and raised in the Philippines so I never experienced the shock of a new culture (except for when I visit the US). Hope you are able to use this forum to its fullest potential. My writing and my stories have gotten better just by applying some of the things I learned within this forum. Also, we…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Structure and Character Arcs in the forum Characters 8 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for all of your input.
(I just felt like posting for no good reason)
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Mark Kamibaya started the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 8 years, 1 month ago
So let’s get to know each other better! What is everyone’s favorite movies (or one of your favorite movies) and why? I realize that people here obviously have different views on certain issues so let me remind everyone that just because someone mentions a certain movie doesn’t mean it’s okay for you to watch it. And also please don’t be a jerk and…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya posted an update 8 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy I didn’t reply to your post on my Structure and Character Arcs topic, but I would like if you could explain Dramatica to me. People say it’s really awesome, but, to me, the only significant advantage that it has is that Dramatica emphasizes the impact character way more than any other form. Everything else that it has to say is…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Blogging? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
I don’t blog, but I really like blogs that are audience-centered instead of author-centered. Like they put out content that other people would be interested in. They don’t just post for their own satisfaction. They graciously consider whether or not other people would be honestly interested in the content they produce. This applies to…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic The worst things a younger sibling could do in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
My older brother and I once started pulling knives on each other and almost stabbed each other. Okay, that’s not funny. And someone could’ve gotten seriously hurt.
Some ideas are them destroying something that you worked really hard on (like a novel). My little bro once told someone I really liked some horrible things about me.…[Read more]
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Hannah Carmichael's profile was updated 8 years, 2 months ago
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Hannah Carmichael posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
Evil for extra credit.
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Hannah Carmichael posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
I’m Hannah the unpaid intern.
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Structure and Character Arcs in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey everyone! Let me try tagging ya’ll @spradlin @theliterarycrusader @winter-rose @overcomer @jess @dragon-snapper @hope @aratrea @clairec @anna-brie @sarah-h
I’m seeing a lot of new faces. Not a lot of the people I used to interact with when the forum began, though. Kind of sad. And happy.
So it seems like people here like the Hero’s Journey,…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Character Outlines in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
What about family, @dragon-snapper ? Besides that I don’t see anything you’ve missed. It’s really great that you’re trying to make characters deeper, but if you want a truly deep character you have to separate characterization and character. Here’s a quote from Story by Robert McKee (the book is written for scriptwriters but it can apply to…[Read more]
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Hannah Carmichael changed their profile picture 8 years, 2 months ago
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Structure and Character Arcs in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
Thanks @sarah-h
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Mark Kamibaya started the topic Structure and Character Arcs in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
So I’ve always wanted to know the answer to this question: What is everyone’s favorite type of structure and character arc? I’m talking about the Bell Curve, the Save the Cat! beats, the Hero’s Journey, the multiple act structure, the Three Act Structure (there are endless variations on this one, but I’m talking about the classic one), and there…[Read more]
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Ha actually @Mark-Kamibaya I really don’t know all that much about Dramatica when it comes to technicalities— I wasn’t sure what I wrote until I saw a post comparing Hero’s Journey and Dramatica, and realized that Dramatica was what I wrote instinctively. I haven’t actually studied it all that much. You may be right that the only significant…[Read more]