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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hello!!! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
Welcome to the site @radically-surrendered! Glad you were able to pull yourself enough away from social media to join us. 😉 Have you written any longer works in the past, or will this pirate story be your first?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@catwing Oh dear. It ate him…
I’ve got to go now. I edited quite a bit. 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@catwing Maybe to Jack it would appear that the flashlight appeared out of nowhere? Like, he can’t see the fairy yet, because he doesn’t know they exist. He doesn’t believe in them yet?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@catwing Gotta love the humor! 😛
Hey catwing, go outline. 😉
Suddenly, a flashlight appeared out of nowhere. Jack put his hand on his head, clenching at his hair! “Goodness me! A flashlight! My requests have been answered!”
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@catwing Yes! Isn’t editing so much fun!
I’m going through and killing all the telling, and making my sarcastic character ten times as snarky. It’s awesome. 😛 I’m about 16, maybe 17% through with editing. Making progress. 😀
I’ve been able to incorporate world building too, which I decided to do after I wrote the book. *hides under piles of…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@catwing Hiya! I’m editing too!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@salome01w4g @that_writer_Girl_99 Time for dinner! Have fun with ethics and novels that don’t want to be written! 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_Girl_99 That sounds…difficult. 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_Girl_99 *pats shoulder*

What’s ethics?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@That_writer_Girl_99 Watcha studying?
@salome01w4g Hiya! I’m worldbuilding. -
Daeus replied to the topic Hello!!! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
Hi, @radically-surrendered 😀
What’s it like in Mexico? I think you’re our first ISTJ ever.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@That-writer-girl-99 Hey, you still there?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@emily @shannon @salome01w4g @daeus @catwing @daughteroftheking
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Snapper replied to the topic New Website Party! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 7 months ago
@michael-stanton *nods* Of course, of course…that makes sense. Poor underlings.
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Snapper replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Kylo Ren is the worst…
@xonos-darkgrate FINALLY! Someone who agrees with me. (@kate-flournoy and @daeus think he’s awesome for some reason…) 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@salome01w4g The Force Awakens is galaxies better. (Pun intended.) You have to see it.
*Does say something else*
Hi 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate I totally love that guy. Rogue One wasn’t my favorite movie, but the villain wins big awesomeness points imo.
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Daeus replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Okay! I think I’ve got it now. I still want to come up with a dramatic tagline, but the rest of it’s done. What do you think?
Trevor is in a mess. After traveling back in time, he and his sister get trapped in medieval England where a mad scientist rules the country with technology and terror. As war brews, Trevor gets the chance to prove his…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Unlikable 12-Year-Old MC in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@raevynstar I wrestled through the same question when writing my second book. I think the key is to not make Fiona completely unlikeable. Give her some likeable traits and give the reader some hints that she’s eventually going to change. If you can also give her sympathetic motivations for her unsympathetic actions and show us what sort of things…[Read more]
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