Jackson Graham

@daeus I’m here.

@dragon-snapper I’m back for another half an hour or so.

@sleepwalkingmk Awesome. Yes, those look like good motivations, especially the protection aspect. A false sense of selflessness can go a long way to creating a compelling villain.

@lifeofkatie Got ya–thanks for the clarification! Yeah, not sure how much I can do about screen sizes, but I’ll see if I can resolve that. 🙂

What makes me trust a character is genuineness.
Although, what really gets me, is if it’s the main character. Or second MC, because no one expects the 2nd MC to be a badguy. Also, you should make him good friends, or supposedly so, with your MC. If Dianne trusts him, I will too. 😀

@DaughteroftheKing My own personal way of wording this (which is infinitely better than Kate’s way, by the way) is that you want the villain to seem like an enemy of the villain. At least, that’s one good way to do it. There are probably others.

So, like Kate was saying, you want him to seem like he has secrets. People are naturally going to…[Read more]

@ethryndal *gasp* How could you?
*fires some dragon snapper fireworks for you*

Well, I’m getting closer to my goals. I reached Chapter 10, and have also reached 20,000 words. Yay!

@daeus Tag me when you come back. 😀

@dragon-snapper Okay, signing off now. I got some editing done. Be back later.

@Kina-lamb You can, actually. You can memorize as many verses together as you want.

@daeus Great!

@dragon-snapper Hey, I’ll join with you for 30 min. 🙂

@daeus @kate-flournoy @winter-rose @anyone else @graciegirl
I’m back, and should be here for most of the day.

@lifeofkatie Thanks for the feedback! Are you referring to the social media buttons or the link to the ‘Contact’ page? On my screen, the ‘Contact’ page is on the same line as the other pages, but that may not be the case on a smaller screen. What kind of device are you using?

@daeus Ooh, nice!

@dragon-snapper I outlined a lesson for an e-course

@daeus I wrote 695.
What’d you do?

@dragon-snapper Haha. Thanks. Okay, signing out now.

@dragon-snapper I’ll be on for about twenty minutes or so.