WarrenLuther04

Hi there! I’m readin’ my history book 😐 anyone on to join me?

@warrenluther04 @rochellaine @dekreel @dragon-snapper @mariposa @skredder @sam-kowal @clairec

@warrenluther04 Great!  And when are we going to be permitted to beta-read this awesome story of yours? 😀

@warrenluther04 here’s the back cover description: <i>An immediate worldwide bestseller when it was published in 1948, Alan Paton’s impassioned novel about a black man’s country under white man’s law is a work of searing beauty. Cry, the Beloved Country is the deeply moving story of the Zulu pastor Stephen Kumalo and his son Absalom, set against t…[Read more]

@warrenluther04 Sorry I wasn’t able to get to answering this sooner. @rochellaine did an excellent job explaining it, though. I don’t think there’s anything I can add to it really.

hey everyone! I’m outlining my dystopian novel right now. anyone here?

@gh24682468999 @dekreel @dragon-snapper @seekjustice @mariposa @warrenluther04 @sam-kowal @rochellaine

hey! I’m reading Cry, the Beloved Country for school right now. anyone wanna join me?

@seekjustice @dekreel @dragon-snapper @sam-kowal @warrenluther04 @mariposa @Jane-maree

@warrenluther04 Usually when people want beta-readers here on KP they post a link to a google doc in the “Novel Critique” or “Short Story Critique” sections of the forum, then tag some people and ask them to look it over.  Sometimes we ask for comments directly in the comments section of the google document (In that case you have to “allow…[Read more]

@rochellaine  Personally, I really like your beginning of “Once there was a boy who loved blueberries.  At least he thought he did.” It’s really fun and perfect for reading aloud to a sleepy 4 year old. 😉

Maybe you could do “Oliver’s parents knew that he loved blueberries,” instead of “His parents knew that he loved blueberries,” at the begi…[Read more]

Whoops! Wrong tag.  @warrenluther04

I understood most of the synopsis, but the last half of it was a bit choppy, could you explain it in a bit more detail?

I love your profile picture, by the way–though the Slytherin house symbol would look much better. 😉 @warrenluther04

@skredder Yes, the confusion is cleared up now. Thanks 🙂

@warrenluther04 Yes!! The series is really awesome (it’s one of my favorites), and there are more people on this forum that like it than you’d think.

@warrenluther04 Thank you! I’m glad you liked it! It is part of a novel I’m working on called Clouded Fury. So, any questions that pop up from reading this short story will be answered there. However, I haven’t decided if I want this to be a scene in the actual story. If I don’t, I’ll still need a scene that achieves the same basic ending that…[Read more]

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I have a character! Her name is Jenna. She has slightly wavy, chin-length, thick brown hair with red highlights, gray eyes, some acne, and maybe a sprinkle of freckles. If you want to do a full-body…[Read more]

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ah, finally getting my drawings posted y’all! So sorry for the delay.

@warrenluther04  Personally I like girls eyes better because boys eyes tend to be angular. I’m more used to drawing girls in general X’D

@catwing  That’s good! I like the eyes 😀

@rochellaine Great topic idea!

Oh! *faints* that quote makes so. much. sense. it’s beautiful 😊

Here’s a quote I found.

I don’t know who Charles de Lint is, but I really like this quote. We each have a unique voice and style, we just have to embrace it.

I’m gonna tag more people: @jane-maree @mariposa @dekreel @daeus @aratrea @radically-surren…[Read more]

@rochellaine Great topic idea!

Oh! *faints* that quote makes so. much. sense. it’s beautiful 😊

Here’s a quote I found.

I don’t know who Charles de Lint is, but I really like this quote. We each have a unique voice and style, we just have to embrace it.

I’m gonna tag more people: @jane-maree @mariposa @dekreel @daeus @aratrea @radically-surren…[Read more]

@daeus The survey was fun actually! I’m gonna tag some more people just in case they don’t know about this.

@mariposa @jane-maree @radically-surrendered @skredder @livgiordano @jessi-rae @sarah-anson @sam-kowal @seekjustice @rochellaine @dekreel @warrenluther04 @dragon-snapper @daughteroftheking @notawriter @that_writer_girl_99 @kaya-young @waterl…[Read more]

@dekreel I like the hat one best too.
@Sarah-anson … It’s “Shoo! Go write a graphic novel so people can read it!” good. 😛
@warrenluther04 Awww… That’s cool! You could make the text bigger though. 😀

@warrenluther04 Sorry it took me a while to respond……I love this! So cool.👍

@sarah-anson Agreed. Eyes are my favorite part too.