WarrenLuther04

@jenwriter17 I don’t know if you’re still on, but I’m finally here! 🙂

tagging also @jane-maree @skredder @jess-penrose

@alia ah, yes, schoolwork. :/ I’m only on now cuz I’m taking a break from it.

@jenwriter17, I would, but there is this mean thing called schoolwork that is keeping me away

@rochellaine @ingridrd @seekjustice @alia @ariel-ashira Anyone wanna write with me? I’m on for a little bit.

Here is a question.  How can I make my first chapter grab the reader, but also make it relate to the story and make my reader care about my MC?

@arie-ashira okey-dokey 😉

@alia @seekjustice @jane-maree @ingridrd @notawriter @itisastarrynight @daeus

@epicaddie2 Cool you have a blog! It looks great! I can’t think of any questions at the moment (I’m sure I’ll think of a million as soon as I submit this post), but I thought I’d tag some folks so they knows about your blog 😉

@jane-maree @catwing @seekjustice @rochellaine @skredder @ingridrd @dragon-snapper @dekreel

@jenwriter17 Good idea!  Yes, tag more people please!

@alia ah, yes I think somebody else here mentioned this. it is awesome! 😀 thanks for reminding me, cuz I forgot about it.

@ariel-ashira watching movies with this kind of situation may help, cuz then you can see facial expression and feelings better than a book. since the relationship is a good one between the son and his family like you say, there will most likely be shock and lots of tears. Some people, when they see someone they thought dead for several years,…[Read more]

@alia I know what you mean.

@skredder He had really good relationships with his family before he was taken away.  Good point!

@ariel-ashira I do think it depends on the relationships the he had with his family before he left.

@daughteroftheking, I definitely think ‘where is the chocolate?’ is the correct question

@epicaddie2, I would agree with question two of the above. I’m always double guessing myself on whether my characters are relatable

@filewriterbase13x The reference is Piglet from Winnie the Pooh. 🙂

@alia Thanks!

@jess-penrose Not so great. 🙁  But right now I’m taking a break to look at Alia’s speech for her.  Maybe when I get back to writing after that it’ll go better.

@alia Goodnight!

@jess-penrose How’s it going?

@rochellaine, @jess-penrose, I’m signing off, gotta go to bed. I was told that 10 is too late to be up writing