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@skredder I’ll be gone a good part of today, but I should finish it late tonight I think. 🙂

@jenwriter17 @seekjustice And here’s part 13.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZhQ5Ix4Jj2cuGKGEtLdv59ETqH3_1VxhZfW2kl9DTuM/edit?usp=sharing

@ariel-ashira Thank you 🙂

signing off…

@ariel-ashira @seekjustice @rochellaine @skredder @alia Anyone on?

@ingridrd I love it!  I left some picky comments, but overall it is just amazing!!!

@seekjustice Oh, boy.  Rochellaine had some good thoughts.  And our language and cultures definatley differ from state to state.  But its a good idea to let us read it, if you are comfortable doing that.

😀 What do you guys say to make fun of us?

And BTW, are you or @rochellaine on the Story Embers forum?

@seekjustice @rochellaine I am on for a little while, I think.

@seekjustice Okay, too bad.  I guess it’ll be goodbye until Monday/Tuesday, then. 🙁

I actually don’t like that song a whole lot either.  Oh well.

We found a couple.  We want to have a whole lot of songs we can sing together.  Right now we know a couple of duets from Sight & Sound, which are good, but they don’t sell the sheet music so we can…[Read more]

Awww thats so sad!  Yes, I will pray.

@seekjustice Haha. 😉

I had to disappear for a bit to get dinner started, but I’ve got twenty minutes right now, so…hi!

Did you like Little Women, the musical? I haven’t listened to much yet, but I haven’t liked what I heard very well so far. 🙁

@seekjustice Sorry, I’m having trouble getting what you’re saying. 🙂  Do you mean that you’re on right now, but won’t be on for the rest of the day?

@seekjustice Okay, well I’ve been thinking about it, and maybe the best thing to do would just be write him the same as you would write an Australian, and then let your beta-readers tell you if there’s anything that sounds weird.

It’s hard for us to think of specific instances of slang or whatever, and if we could, you’d have a hard time keeping…[Read more]

@skredder Thank you!!! <3

@rochellaine Yes, I agree. 🙂

@kaya-young  I like that part too.  🙂

@ariella-newheart  Thanks for your comments!  And don’t worry about being late.  🙂 🙂

@rochellaine And I’m cutting out for the night. I gotta go to bed. Good luck with the western! 🙂

@skredder 🙂 Hooray for shattered trust!  An author’s key to wonderful anxiety and emotional impact on our characters.

But I’m going to go now, I think.  It’s getting late.  Goodnight!  Have fun with the heart-to-heart!