WalkByFaith

@esther-c

I will take any feedback! Thank you!

@highscribeofaetherium @freedomwriter76

Yes its pretty disturbing😬  But don’t worry, in the end it all gets stopped and everyone is safe! 😃

@esther-c

Oh my goodness, she is! XD I actually read the writing book first too, and that’s how I got into her books! You should definitely check her out! 😁

@esther-c

It’s pretty good! It does have some fantasy stuff like with the Roman gods. Personally I prefer the Ascendance books, but the author is good in general and she has a lot of great books, so they might be worth checking out! Another author you might like is Ally Carter, have you heard of her?

@freedomwriter76 @highscribeofaetherium

😂😂😆🤣🤣

@euodia-vision

Of course!

Haha, just checking xD. Ohh, woww 😅 That’s insane.. girl, I don’t know how you do it xD. Yeahh, that makes sense. I’ve never been to a 4-H thing before, but it was really cool! We got to see a bunch of really sweet sheep too 🥰.

I’ll definitely have to check them out! We went to the library today, but they didn’t have…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

Ok! I sent you an invite!

@thearcaneaxiom

Yeah, I guess it’ll just depend. Sort of, yeah, because they’re in the Nowhere? I didn’t really notice that the first two seemed darker, but I only read the beginning of the third one.

@godlyfantasy12

I really like the way you designed your world! That definitely makes sense, sometimes it feels like magic can be opposite from a Christian worldview, but the way you explained it makes a lot of sense. If God created it in your world, of course there’s good magic–but like everything, humans will try and use it for their own advantage, lol.

@freedomwriter76 😁

@mineralizedwritings I’m pretty good, hru? ❤️

@thearcaneaxiom

Ohhhh, yeah, probably not 😅. Thanks anyway, though! Ugh, yes, ikr.

Oh, okay 🤔 That’s weird.. ok, thanks! I’ll have to maybe check them out!

Ahhh, gotcha. Yeah, I read the summary of the third one and it seemed like maybe it was going in a darker direction, idk.…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Well.. C.H.I.M.E is a little bit disturbing to some people, it is a horrible, evil and nasty government facility that… (here comes the scary part!) Changes humans into machines expertly. Yep. The kids have to walk all 406 miles they would have drove to C.H.I.M.E to save their parents and top the facility if they can.

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you! Your right about some of those errors, I’ll fix that. 🙂

@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76

Thank you! Yes, Vikii is already one of my most favorite also!

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @everyone!!

I wrote some more for my WIP! I would love your guys’s feedback on it!

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The sun moved higher and higher up in the sky, while the scenery stayed the same.

Hugo was in the lead, I was in the middle and Sam held up the back.

“I wish we had a machete.” Hugo sighed, brushing asi…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Oooohhhh wait Bucky has SIBLINGS???? XD

For some reason, I’m not getting tags for stuff again.. sorry if I miss things 🤨

@euodia-vision

Hey! I’m not sure if you still have time, I know you’ve been busy lately, so just lemme know what works! I’m sure I can figure out everything after I mess with it for a bit, but if you’d still want to I’d love to have you help! There is a way to add collaborators on Wix, so I would just need your email, but if you’re not…[Read more]

Wow.. that was a lot of books xD I guess I should’ve expected that. Thanks for replying everyone! I’ll try to answer all of them, lol

@whalekeeper

Yep! In my opinion, the second one got a little weird but I might still finish it.. just skip over some parts.

Oooh, I’ll have to check that one out! It looks kind of interesting! Thanks!…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I read both chapters you posted…😢 😭 I love them!🥹

@freedomwriter76

Sorry I didn’t get tagged for that, lol 🤔
Yep, read Narnia, started LOTR! still haven’t finished it though, so there’s that.
Oh, okay! Maybe I’ll look into it! Yeah, I know, it’s hard to find serieses that don’t do that.. thanks though! Yeah, 1984 probably no 😅, maybe someday lol. I appreciate it!

@whalekeeper

I started that!! The first one was really good!