WalkByFaith

@rainmaker

Hi Divinity ! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m homeschooled and  I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I write Dystopian and post-apocalyptic books. Oooh! A historical fantasy muder mystery sounds exciting! I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! OK, no…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Girl I legit started laughing!!!

Haha! I’m glad! Hugo is so funny, (I based him off my brother so I have plenty of ideas, lol!)

@ferwhen_grace

Oh, I just read that, a few things about me?? Hmmm..

I just moved cross country

I have 26 pets (One dog, two Guinea pigs, two parakeets, three ducks, five guinea hens and the rest chickens)

I have been home schooled since first grade.

I do blog, (heres the link if you want to check it out 🙂 )      acancello.blogspot.com

I lo…[Read more]

@trailblazer @acancello @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @grcr @mineralizedwritings

Ottoline

Her hands shook as she fingered the delicate blue fabric. This is for me?  She wondered. What kind of person do they think I am? She could never wear that, she decided. This was too beautiful a dress for someone like her. She ran a hand through her tangled ha…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I’m good, thanks! How are you doing?

@fernweh_grace

Hi! Of course you can be here, everyones welcome 🙂 lets see…. I dont really have the patience to look at moss, my mom and brother love to do it, but I cant really get into it. I do loooove to look at paintings though! I haven’t read any of those books you listed either, but I am…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Oh, sorry, it is chapter 6!

Well, two years have passed, and Sef has been abused, so that changes her personality a little bit. They both get older and more mature. What do you mean by different, like personality?

@thearcaneaxiom

I’m putting more thought into the 4th chapter. Then I’m going to make it so Lilitu gets 2 chapters. What do you think of the revisal?

Chapter 4: A theif

“Git your grubby fingers off that bread!” Lilitu froze. He looked longingly at the loaf of bread which might as well have been a bar of gold, before turning to face the e…[Read more]

@jonas

Wow, how are you so good at creating magic systems? i’m so jealous, lol

@jonas

I like the idea of the table with the powers intersecting!

@acancello

“A masquerade party?” Amir said, completely bewildered. “Why?”

“Maybe they’re torturing us,” Hugo joked, “what could be worse than dressing up and dancing with girls?” He laughed, seeming to have made a full recovery.

Girl I legit started laughing!!!

“That’s strange,” Amir commented from the floor, “these clothes, this rack here.…

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@whalekeeper

They’re going great, and I’ve been getting so much great feedback on my story? How about you?

@acancello

I followed you and I can see your pins! I actually have two accounts, one I use most of the time, but I think @euodia-vision said that one was private, so you could try my other one if you want.

https://pin.it/67wMvFR

@keilah-h

(The fact that you kept yourself committed to a whole long chapter book is better than I can do, tbh.)

Ikr!!! XD

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter @everyone

Hey guys! How are you all doing?

@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @grcr @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @I hopeIgoteveyone

Hugo

Ottolines story was horrible, making Hugos seem simple in comparison. She had been through so much, for so long.

“You didn’t deserve that. No one would.” He said, a bit choked up.

Ottoline looked at the floor. He lost control and g…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Do you think that the Paynes of the labor camp would use names still, but perhaps only in hushed tones especially around Pythonos?

Yeah I think so.

 An issue that I’m beginning to see now however is that it still feels like there’s no continuity of characters. Who do the readers connect to? Once they get to know one set of char…

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@acancello @mineralizedwritings

Yeah I’m good with whatever 🙂

@freedomwriter76

🥰🥰🥰 great job, girl!!

@traiblazer

KP ate my original post where I had put all the ages of the McKinleys and so I had to hurry and redo it. So I must have forgotten to put Esther’s age, but she’s seven like @grcr said.

@trailblazer

They’re both still young though, so any romance between them would have to stay pretty light and not get too serious until they’re a little older. Bennett also is going to the army when he turns 17 or 18, but depending how their relationship would play out, they could write letters to each other and such.

I know you also said Tin…

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