WalkByFaith

@highscribeofaetherium

Lol your new profile pic is so confusing. I keep thinking you’re GRCR 😂

Same!!! I thought I was the only one, lol

@fernweh_grace

Of course!

@jonas

okay, sounds good.

@esther-c

Woah, I will check that out!

@jonas

I feel like I just went…XD Rae went too…so I think its either you or HighScribe’s turn. Unless you really don’t want to, lol

@esther-c

I’m glad I was able to help!

@fernweh_grace

I happened to stumble upon this by chance….and I’m glad I did! Your writing is beautiful! It’s so sad….but beautiful! (you should publish this…)

@esther-c

I read the chapter, and I think I see what you mean.

I wouldn’t say that your problem is the lack of action. I think the way you opened with the painting scene is a great introduction. It introduces Ami’s character, how she’s artistic, what she values, what kind of person she is. So it definitely doesn’t need more action. The way you…[Read more]

Just kidding, I’ll start at :55. I have to get pumpkin pie first, lol.

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium

*sighs* Okay, I changed my mind again.

I’m not doing first person (you’re welcome, Jonas, lol).

But I am in a sense, starting over.

Before you freak out, let me explain.

I’m still keeping the original beginning (Elysium, Pythonos, A Swift Death, A Thief, Gone, Stolen, and An Orphan). So bas…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ugh, sorry you’re going through that! That’s hard!

Could you maybe post some segments of it so I can see more of what you mean?

All I can say is that maybe you’re focusing a little too much on all the potential problems. (I’m speaking from experience) Sometimes you need a little break, or maybe you’re overthinking it. If its boring to…[Read more]

I’m gonna do a sprint, i’ll probably start at :50 and end at :20 or something like that, if anyone wants to join.

@jonas

Yeah, I think just adding villains to this one will work.

@jonas

I think adding villains would be cool (if you have already made the decision, that fine) I wont be adding another person, I wont be RPing to much either (I know I dont now 🙂 but I dont think I’ll be  active on KP to much, I’m getting pretty busy) Thanks for asking!

@esther-c

Oof, those are hard questions. For the first one, I get what you mean. I think for the first chapter, an introduction is fine. Personally, I would try to focus on the relationship between Ami and Ev, and his family conflict, because I think that will hook the reader.
And then, themes are also really hard. Could you describe yours a…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, I’m good with whatever XD

It might make more sense to keep them seperate…it was just an idea…the Dark Castle RP does seem kind of slow right now and i thought it might help speed things up XD as well as solve the question of what the king wants and why they’re there.

@jonas

Well, we could combine them while keeping them separate at the same time. What I mean is…they’ll have the same story as the Character Party, but we’ll just RP the villains in the Dark Castle RP and RP the “heroes” here. The two role plays would intersect, or so to speak, when the villains cross paths with the “heroes”, but we’d role play…[Read more]

And since everyone in the Dark Castle RP is already in this one as well, it would be easier to connect the RP’s.