WalkByFaith

@hybridlore

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s a second book I don’t think it’s a big problem.

I agree, the ending is abrupt, but I’m not sure how to make it any less so. It just kinda m…[Read more]

@jonas @whalekeeper @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @rae

@savannah_grace2009

Great job on the outline! I know it’s hard XD I’ve tried to outline my stories before, but tbh I never really got a complete outline.

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s…[Read more]

@jonas @rae @freedomwriter76

Sef

“I-I guess we could stay together,” Sef said softly. She didn’t want the others upset at her for wanting to split up, and if they thought that was better…she would do what they wanted. She was used to not having her own way. She didn’t deserve it.

She just wanted to go home. Back home where nobody cared one…[Read more]

@esther-c

Okay! That’s fine! I totally understand not having brainpower lol!

@esther-c

Lol!! Fynn XD

Livia

“That would be fun,” Liv said slowly, contemplating it. If she was going to go to the dance, she might as well learn how to, well, dance. “Where are the classes?”

Ummm….idk what character to add.

Oh wait. On second thought….

I’m adding Brigitta (Briggs) a really adorable little girl. She has green hair, skin, and eyes and can manipulate plants. She’s really sweet, is about 8 years old. (she kind of reminds me of @rae ‘s Nae in the Character Castle…wait that’s her name, right??)

She can be useful to…[Read more]

@esther-c

Livia

She gave Lukas a high five and lowered her eyes, smiling to herself.

“I think I may have gone a little overboard…” she laughed, “but the expression on his face was worth everything!”

“No kidding,” Lukas shook his head.

And then a thought crossed her mind. “Wait. I think we have a problem.”

Lukas tilted his head to the side.…[Read more]

@rae

It’s okay, Sara is the name of one of calyhuge’s charries, I only know cuz I haunted this forum before I joined. You’re good.

Oh. Oh. Ohhhhh. That makes so much more sense XD Thanks!!

@calyhuge

how dare you steal my name!!! lol jk

@savannah_grace2009

Ill be praying for your mom 💗, sorry that had to happen, back injury’s are the worst!

@lydibug

Oooh! This seems really fun! I will see if I can join…

@lydibug

Sounds like so much fun!!! Am I understanding correctly that there is one ghost for every charrie involved?

@calyhuge

Sara’s in the group too fyi

Or she could be lost

Huh? did I miss a conversation? i’m confuzzled

@beth-torres

On a wooden boat in the middle of the ocean then… Fire Face.

YES.

@rae @jonas

Yeah, we just need chaos and we’ll be fine XD Chaos is the solution to EVERYTHING, am I right? lol

@esther-c

Liv

“I know this guy,” Fynn edged closer to her. Liv rolled her eyes.

“Um, no.”

“Are you sure?” he raised an eyebrow. “I think you two would have a connection, if you know what I mean,” he tapped his two index fingers together.

“Stop trying to set me up!” Liv whirled around, startling Fynn. She fought to keep a straight face.…[Read more]

@jonas

Lets see… I do think that the huge story was a little bit much with the large number of dragons you picked (Though the idea was totally amazing!) That was a lot to keep track of for a person like me who isn’t on here to much. I think if you guys who are on here more often want to keep doing it, you should totally go for that on here…[Read more]

@rae

Stepped on, kicked, bitten, bucked off, et cetera et cetera.

For real!! One time my little sister and I were leading our horses in the pasture and then a snake appeared, spooking the horse my sis was leading. The horse knocked my sister down and jumped right over her. He was so close to stepping on her head!!! I was so scared…and i was too…[Read more]

K I have to go unpack…ugh. Be back later!