Raegan Aubrey

@freedomwriter76

OH MY GOSH CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!! I am so happy for you! You’ll have to tell me the name when you actually print it so I can read it, haha!

One of my goals is to publish my first book before I turn 16/before I graduate. (I’m really young for my grade, so I’ll be 16 my senior year and then in september I’ll turn 17 then graduate…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Also, I have to know…is Libbie ever going to fall for Albert? It’s okay if you can’t say because of spoilers but I just wanted to know, haha.

@trailblazer

Got it! I’d just never heard it before, but it makes sense.

@sarafini

One thing I noticed was that it was really hard to tell that it was a dream. If you weren’t looking close enough, you would have missed it. So since it’s a dream, you might want to make it more obvious. But I liked your story! It was good!

@thearcaneaxiom

I like your idea of that the magic words are evil because of the purpose given by the Pythonos. So I might use that? I’m still not sure, haha!

Names of people:

Ottoline, Marcurious, Sparrow, Rishona, Berko, Sef, Lilitu, Azazel, Indie, Jordan (I need a new name for him, an evil one, so if you could help that would be great!),…[Read more]

@trailblazer

“I’ll just be thankful when I can sleep in a bed again and have a roof over my head,” Etta whispered back. I mentally chided myself for longing for something so vain when even the most

practical needs still weren’t met. Etta had a wisdom I lacked. What did it matter if we were a little dirty and dusty? No one else in our party m…

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@esther-c

I’m so excited, lol!

@grcr

Who wants to start? I’ve never done this before, so anyone more experienced want to start?

@thearcaneaxiom

what do you mean by a list of names and consonants?

Do you mean names of characters?

@grcr

Thank you! Yes, I do like the name and it seemed to fit her character! That’s funny that you have a sister named Neveah! haha

@thearcaneaxiom

Interesting, so in that case, what would have allowed a universal language to come about? A grand unification? Maybe just a tongue similar to what is happing with English that simply became more…

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@grcr

That would be fun!

@thearcaneaxiom

Great! What language would it be? Would you want a universal Andromedan tongue, or something for each of the groups, or even something else entirely?

Just a universal Andromedan language and some magic words.

@thearcaneaxiom

Makes sense. Though that leaves me with some questions about the first chapter still. Why give Jordan and his wife such a beginning? Despite making it obvious that they are evil, you’ve humanized them by giving them a dying child, and having them feel grief. Also, why did you project Kratos in a negative light almost directly, w…

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@trailblazer

hopefully Kari and Ottoline will be friends! They have some things in common!

@hybridlore

Sure since that’s what it sounds like everyone wants.  This is gonna be fun!

@grcr I love british accents!!!

@hybridlore

Sure since that’s what it sounds like everyone wants.  This is gonna be fun!

@grcr I love british accents!!!

Yeah I still can’t and I’ve tried every day 🙁

@jonas

That’s okay! 🙂

@esther-c @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore

Ottoline is very excited to join the party!

She’s about 5’1 with mid length strawberry blonde hair. She was kidnapped by Pythonos as a baby and experimented on until she escaped at thirteen. So she’s very shy and has a little PTSD from being abused.

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@grcr I don’t know what kind of party it is, haha! You guys can decide, but I have some ideas.

A birthday party? (I wasn’t sure on this one, because we’d have to decide who’s birthday it is)

A costume party?

A fall harvest party?

A super bowl party?

These are just random thoughts, so if you have more, please post! Thank you!