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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Baron (Brutus)—Ben Gunn, Flare, Ellis, trying to find Fel and Brea (I think I got that right)
Brutus hesitated in following the others. The soldiers were terrified of these creatures. He held his scarf up over his nose and mouth. His eyes followed the disappearing forms of his companions. He could use his wind to…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Character Arcs in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Could you give me some more description on these teens?
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RAE posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago
@stephie I saw your new name at the top of a topic page saying you had posted, and I was so confused for a moment there lol.
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RAE replied to the topic How do you world build? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I…worldbuild in the dark at night usually (I have trouble sleeping) and I rarely, if ever, actually write a comprehensive thing on my world, I just scribble things on random sheets of paper or in notebooks that I then loose in the sea of notebooks that I have already.
Yeah, I need to change some of my writing habits.
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RAE replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Tenz
As Emeline spoke, Tenz shrunk back against the wall. The vapor around him had all but disappeared besides the tendrils that carried Reid. “I want Omi,” His quiet, childish voice, barely to be heard, was tinged with loneliness and sorrow.
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RAE replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
Thank you for the critique! You gave me some very helpful feedback.
Just a couple things to address so you don’t have to keep wondering
The second and third sentences seem to imply that Max’s only non-human feature is that his eyes are full of emotion. That doesn’t seem like a necessarily inhuman trait. Do I understand cor…
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
RAE THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!! YOU ARE AN INSANELY AMAZING AUTHORESS! Oh wow! This is so good! The characters, the world, the personalities, the dialogue, the description!!!!! I COULD GO ON FOREVER!!!!!!!!!
Wow, thanks.
I wasn’t expecting that enthuastic of a response.
Hopefully notifications work for you…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium
Third story! This should fill in a few gaps from the second
A Visitor in the Night
“’Suuuuuuch is…the faaaaaaate of the eh-vil–”“Not /eh/. Look, there’s a vowel after the /v/, so it’s…C’mon, you’re almost done,” A mother coaxed her young son.
“/Ee/! Ee-vil-do-er.’ Evil-doer, right?” Simeon…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
It is supposed to say they usually hang out at their own house, and are not seen out in the open lol!
WHAT IS THISSSS
IT’S EVEN MORE ACURRATE
AHHH I LOVE IT SO MUCHTHANK YOU SO MUCHHHH
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
@theduckator
Idkkkk
Personally I don’t think it’s wrong to say it’s not a religion…
But we also have different denominations and my church has done sermons where my pastor has taught that Christianity is a “relationship, not a religion” so it could just be how I was raised. I respect your opinion and I’m not going to judge you or anything j…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
HOW ARE THESE SO ACCURATE
you literally just described me…
It doesn’t have many friends
the magic potato just called me out….XDXD
ahhh i love it thank youuuuuu
*screams excitedly* I GOT A POTATOOOOOOOOOO
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
LOL! Who needs a braining brain when ya got a jumbled mess of chaos (If that makes any sense)? 😂 I know I have it.
EXACTLY
SOMEBODY GETS ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL. I lost a funny meme but it was so relatable. It had to do with not having touched any WIP since the cold winter of 1878… I think that’s me rn😂
That was me this fall. Idk wha…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Honestly, when I write scenes I feel nothing.
Which makes me feel really bad, especially when other people tell me when they write hard scenes they cry a lot, and I’ve never really cried like that. The only time I can remember tearing up is when Sef was getting abused by Iver in a scene I wrote like last year…and it still hurts my…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I showed that scene to one of my friends, and her exact words were:
“Livia and Marcurious have never been more annoying, and Aubrielle has never been more relatable”.
It was so funny lolll
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
am I the only one who loves books yet still dog ears the pages??
like i’m so protective of my books yet dog eared pages don’t bother me….
I mean, maybe it’s because I love books so much that I’m too desperate to mark my page right away than go find a bookmark, idk…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
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RAE replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Sorry… I just wanted to use that meme template really badly!
It’s totally fine. I’m glad to see everyone enjoying themselves making memes about me lol
Also, I found the typo funny
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