Raegan Aubrey

@freedomwriter76

I think that’s the best intro yet! Just bursts in there with a gun in his hand! XD Love It!

@freedomwriter76

(haha, your Leon reminds me of my own Leon XD)

ha ha 😂 that’s cool…I’m waiting to get him to the dining room because he’s starving. maybe that’s why he’s so mad. Just needs some breakfast.

@freedomwriter76

Thanks, I just felt in the mood.

@hanako @jonas @grcr @highscribe (to lazy to find your actual tag) @savannah_grace2009

Nahim

Before Ottoline could answer there was a shout of someone murdering each other. Nahim spun, alarmed, hand unhooking his sword ready for anything. Ellis, Zahlin and two new people Nahim hadn’t met were all in an argument, Zahlin looking ready to kill a…[Read more]

Leon

“Yeah I know him. Not much, but we’ve met before.” Leon look at Flaz and then back at Ellis.

Leon

“I don’t even know Flaz, and that’s what makes me mad.” Leon replied annoyed. “I’m always ready for adventure just not unexpected ones.”

@jonas @grcr

Leon

“I’m willing also.” Leon replied. “What do you mean by get through alive? Are we destined to die?”

Leon turned looked at Flaz not sure whether to be happy or upset. “What on earth are you doing here Flaz?” he almost yelled.

leon

“you know what…I mean it..how old are old you Zahlin? Actually, both of you.” leon stammered. “Why, I’m not sure whether to respect you like my father or brother or treat you like a fiend. State it now. Are you friend or foe?”

@jonas

“I’m Leon Gomez, from Notopia in Extroit.” he replied, gaining his confidence a little.

Leon

Leon started back surprised by the strange sound. His face turn a little pale. “Who screamed?” he said a bit under his breath. He turned and looked at the man who had just approached.

Ellis scrambled to his feet and marched across the room, one hand resting on the hilt of his sword. “What’s going on here?” he demanded, glaring suspi…

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The only drawback is…it leaves painful headaches for the “victim”…

@highscribeofaetherium

Leon

“Zahlin.” He said, “And we’re talking about my age? How about you? Who though it would be a good idea to give a child a sword?”

“I’m no child,” Leon retorted. “I’ve train with this sword here since I was five.” Leon backed up a bit. “And as it is I would challenge you to a duel, but my strength is not with me.”

@trailblazer

I mean, she could’ve had a crush before her family moved… but I didn’t think that far back lol. It doesn’t really matter for the sake of the story though. I’ll try to update this again soon.

Well, it’s the first in the story XD

SOMEONE HELP US THESE GUYS ARE QUITE POSSIBLY GOING TO MURDER EACH OTHER!” The Sword screamed.

Zahlin froze.

You’re welcome. Sword said proudly.

That’s hilarious

@savannah_grace2009

Nahim

“She’s alright.” Nahim spun around. All it was was one of guys he had seen at the party. Nahim looked at Ottoline. She was still trembling a little, but she seemed relieved by the presence of the other man. “She’s just a little on edge.” ‘Yeh, she’s afraid of me.’ 

“Ottoline, that’s a pretty name, it fits you. Well, w…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Awww…Libbie has her first (????) crush!

I like this chapter!

@jonas

 From what I have seen, I’m thinking Ellis might not like him, but we’ll have to wait till he actually shows up to interact with them.

Ellis doesn’t like anyone, lol XD

(except guys that have cool swords. Even then, there’s a chance he’ll hate you)

(just kidding.)

@rae

Pronunciation: Otto-line (Otto as in the name otto plus line)

Ottoline

“Are you chilled?” He asked.

“I-I-” she began. She desperately wanted to run, but her feet might as well have been useless bricks.

“She’s alright,” a familiar voice spoke from next to her. Hugo. “She’s just a little on edge.” Ottoline managed to smile at him g…[Read more]

Woops! It might be tomorrow before I can look at your website. Eh! Tech, so many problems!

@devastate-lasting

Honestly (IF you want my opinion) I like your originally title. Though it’s your choice.

Ooh! A button I can push!