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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
I honestly don’t know XD
Here’s the link you can use (but there’s not a lot of “new chapters”…and the first couple “new” chapters need a lot of redoing, but you can read ahead if you want! Just keep in mind that if you critique them, I’ve seen a lot of the problems already. The new chapters I’m talking about are…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 2 months ago
I just found THE BEST Christian singer ever…her name’s Hannah Barr! Pleeaaasssseee look her up!
My favorites are: Miss Independence, P31, I Am, The Search, You Were There. But I really love ALL her songs, she’s amazing! <3 -
Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
That reminds me @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h
Are you guys still in this rp, or have you decided to drop out?
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Why is it every time I read one of your rps I laugh so hard that I start crying?
Also, i know some kids in class tripped my poor Chase twice, but I don’t think we’ve officially added any bullies. Though the math teacher…does she count?
Um, me, Whaley, Loopy’s taking a break, Esther, Sara, Freedom is currently not in any rps, Keilah…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
“Nope, still not lost. Just temporarily misplaced the destination.”
“Left! Left! Left!…your other left!”
“Skilled enough to take it apart Patient enough to put it back together Smart enough to hide the extra parts when I’m done”
Three Krogen quotes right there! LOL Cgecko needs to see this!
Totally can see someone saying…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Wait really??!!!! I want to read that!!! I love capture scenes. Especial if the badguys are really mean and the hero still doesn’t lose his head. all though, from what I’ve seen of Nahim………
He does pretty well in the beginning, but then Vorgan uses Nahim’s greatest fear to break him. It’s the darkest hour in my book, and I haven’t…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 2 months ago
Decided I was going to take a break from KP yesterday, because the plot of my WIP needed fixing and stuff but I think I fixed it so, I’ll be around until next time I get upset about how awful my writing is.
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You’re writing’s NOT awful! I’ve always admired you and your style and passion for it!
And don’t put pressure on yourself to be perfect.
Also remember your identity is in Christ, and He gives you the gift of writing! When I get stuck, I pray about it, and then the words and plot just come to me.
But girl I know how rough it is…you get…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 2 months ago
Bye
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I figured out my problem, so I’m going to be still here. I know I was only gone 15 hours but I needed the mindset I guess to actually get stuff done.
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WHAT YOU WERE GOING TO LEAVE?!?! huh girl whattttt?
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Temporarily, not like forever. I just had a bit of a realization that my WIP makes no sense, and I got really stressed out. So, I was going to take a break for like a month or so, but then I got over it. It was nothing
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Ohhh haha
It’s okay cuz my WIP doesn’t make any sense either…I’ve been there and I know how stressful that is XD XD-
DON’T SCARE ME LIKE THAT AGAIN
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@anyone else who’s read Nahim is bad at guns
I take it back!
So, I was doing some research stuff this afternoon, ya know, adding more suspicious stuff to my search history, and finally looked up how to correctly write a sword fight, cuz I’ve been avoiding those since I’m really bad at fight scenes. During my quest for…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
One, Mandin said it would take Nahim several minutes to defeat an opponent with a sword. Exchanges with swords actually usually last for a handful of seconds.
I know that, you know that, Nahim knows that, but Mandin? Sure, he probably does, but he’s trying to make a point. He’s been attempting to get Nahim into guns for a…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Livia
“I’m an Aquino,” she shrugged. “I was born with it.”
She formed a miniature waterspout over her hands and watched it whirl, then letting it fall into a small puddle at her feet.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Don’t think I’ve posted this before, but have been wanting to.It’s the beginning scenes for Black Wolf, Green Eyes, Chase’s second novel idea. If you don’t know, Chase is a young man by now.
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 I have a Chase scene you may or may not have seen before
“You boys have five minutes to finish before we head out ag…
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
i like the story idea, but the tech level sounds to much like our time. I don’t get that sci-fi vibe from it.
Any books, movies, CDs, pictures, letters, or anything that in the least way suggested something that we don’t agree with will be
CD’s should not be mentioned. By 2065, those will be as unheard of in a household as c…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I’ll post more scenes if I find any good ones.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @idk
Hi. This is a scene from Guardians Angels. Criticism is requested and welcome.
Nahims sword sang as it sailed towards his opponent. The opponent blocked, swinging its second sword towards Nahim…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Oh no! I’m so sorry again…
I need to spend some time with my sister, we’re about to do a Bible study!
I feel sooo bad, but I have to go….I’m sorry!
It’s writing nonstop until whatever time you set. Like I usually go for fifteen to thirty minutes, and write about 1-2K words if I get enough inspiration.
If you want, you can…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Aww thanks girl <3
Don’t be sad!!!! I only thought of it because the whole scene felt winter and cold and dead to me. Like those feelings just mirrored Sef’s. It was you writing her so well that made me think of it. Actually, the other day i was thinking, “Man, she is so good! Look at hers compared to mine!” lol.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Oh no I’m so sorry…I didn’t see this!!!
Could we maybe still do it now??
I understand if you can’t XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 2 years, 2 months ago
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I am now a fan 😆
REALLY?!?!
YESSSSSS LET’S GO!!!!
What are your favorites???
Hmm… *contemplates for way too long*
P31, I Am, Calling, You Were There, and Like Me, I think.
Those are all sooooo good!!!!!!!!
Have you heard Wait For You, or HQME, or LOML? Elias is soooo sad it almost made me cry!!!!
Haha I was just about to say that I forgot about HQME. LOML is also really good.
I know! That one was really sad 🥺
Haha! I love how she has so many different styles, like rap (sort of), upbeat, worship, country/Christian, and also really sad songs to cry to XD