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@Daeus first of all, it’s Rey and Finn. An e, and two ns. Get it right.

Second of all— yes. I noticed. And I like that. Because he seems to be doing a lot better. *nods*

@Dragon-Snapper noooooo! 🙁 🙁 🙁 I’m so sorry. I have no idea why.

@Emma-Flournoy of course. But since her son obviously couldn’t make himself do it— *gross sobbing*— I’m not quite clear on how, yet.

Ehh… I revived. 😛

@Emma-Flournoy he finds a nice sweet mechanic who also comes from a hard past and isn’t too high or great for him. *nods*

NOT TO MENTION THERE IS ‘REDEMPTION ARC’ WRITTEN ALL OVER THIS THING.
Seriously— his denial? His frantic craze to bury the past? It should have already been buried. He shouldn’t be having to struggle through this again.
But he is.
Which means…

*explodes from contained excitement and dies*

@Daeus I KNOW. I’m just… trying to play it cool here.

Trying.

Tryyyyinnnnggggg…

*deep breath* If I get too excited I’ll be let down. So. I shall not get excited.

*faints from excitement*

Okay, so the one big takeaway from this trailer… I think… NO PROMISES, BUT I THINK—! I could see a relationship between them working.
My biggest…[Read more]

@Daeus Congratulations. The world could use more of those. 😉

@bethanysinkyroses that would be @sierra-r and I have forgotten Cindy’s as well. 😛

The first thing that strikes me as I read your summary here is that you’ve focused a lot on symbolism.
That’s a good thing. But it can also be a hindrance. In my experience, when I focus too much on the symbolism of a thing, it comes out one-dimensional as only…[Read more]

@warrioroftherealm no character is ever cliche if they are approached as a person with a logical reason for being who and where they are in life. It sounds like this woman has a very good reason for being ‘strong’.

At the same time, I think ‘strong woman’ is frequently misunderstood or misinterpreted. A strong woman is not a masculine woman. A…[Read more]

@winter-rose I blame @xonos-darkgrate‘s profile pic. XD

@salome01w4g yikes. D: I’m glad everything worked out.

@catwing lol. XD

Yeah, @Hope‘s definitely the one to ask if you have fairytale questions. 😉

@jess-penrose this looks like a very solid idea. However, the one thing that’s sticking out to me is that you have no plot twists. There are no reveals— no changing of the scene or forcing existing scenes to be viewed in different lights.
One of the reasons for this is that Taryn has one goal to pursue throughout the entire story and it’s the…[Read more]

@catwing THAT’S IT. I LOVE YOUR OPTIMISM. KEEP IT UP. DO NOT SUCCUMB TO THE DARK SIDE.
I may or may not actually have half a dozen scenarios worked up in my head about how his redemption arc could go… and how the moviemakers could ruin it. *scowls*
Optimism though. We must be optimistic.

@graciegirl nope, the fact that they died was my fave thing too. *nods*

@catwing whoa, pretty cool.

@lifeofkatie well to be fair I never claimed to be sane. *raises eyebrows*

@salome01w4g I was being sarcastic, if that’s what you’re asking. 😛