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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 12 months ago
@valtmy Chara and myself do thank you from the bottom of our hearts. Perchance there is hope for our story to be written without the tragedy of it costing us both our lives. How does your own book progress?
But now, I pray you, why did you this harm to me, to make me intent on writing verses of love? My head is filled with thoughts such as th…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 12 months ago
@valtmy Ah, a trying journey indeed. Alas, but my WIP is neither smoothly nor easily written. I pray you send some encouragement my way, that I may with renewed hope attempt to conquer a heroine who has vouchsafed to swoon at every inconvenient moment and to weep at the recollection of past troubles. She is becoming a great trial and nearly ha…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 12 months ago
@valtmy Well met, friend! How goes it with you? What write you at present?
(Upon the chance that you may wonder from whence cometh my fair speech, I have Robin of Locksley on my mind.)
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 12 months ago
@jenwriter17 @seekjustice @ariel-ashira @alia @valtmy Anyone on?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@valtmy That’s great! (I hope you did well. 😀 ) Are you going to be on here more often now, if your other work is less?
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Skredder replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@valtmy Good!! 😀
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introvert_girl replied to the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years ago
General impressions: I really liked it, and find the premise/laws of fate to be very intriguing.
Some things I would expect or be interested in seeing moving forward:
– Juqing and Wanyu meeting
– The relationship between Wanyu and her father or Wanyu and her teacher/his family and the other students (how do they react to finding out she’s…[Read more] -
introvert_girl replied to the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years ago
@valtmy I’m available to read through this now, though it wouldn’t let me access it.
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Catwing replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@valtmy @ariel-ashira Praying…
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@skredder Ah, not good. I don’t like strong winds. 🙁
It would be awesome, but it’s just not going to happen. 😀 I’m now editing – no, rewriting – a section of my book after @seekjustice and @valtmy tore it apart. 😛 It’s actually going pretty well, but I wish I had written it correctly the first time!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@valtmy Ugh. I can completely relate to problems with school and exams! 🙁 I’ll be praying for you.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@valtmy Praying!
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Skredder replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@valtmy I’m praying.
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Contemporary Western Novel in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years ago
@kaya-young @jenwriter17 @valtmy Thank you all so much for your comments! I haven’t finished editing the last section yet, but I have the next section done if you’d like to read it and edit it for me! 🙂
@ariel-ashira The offer to let you edit it still stands, but if you still don’t want to, you can read it anyway. 😀
I put in the last part…[Read more]
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Joy started the topic The School Bully in the forum Characters 8 years ago
*appears out of nowhere*
Greetings, Kapeefers! I’m going to peak my head out of my hiatus for a second to ask some questions:
In my children’s books, I have a school bully, and lately I have been considering giving him a bigger part of my books. So my questions are: What are the motives of a bully? What are the literary cliches of a bully? And…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@valtmy @rochellaine @skredder @seekjustice @ethryndal
Hey, guys. Two things: 1) Could you keep me in your prayers this week? I have practice late every night for a play that I’m in and performances Thursday—Saturday. Please pray that I can stay on top of schoolwork and everything despite being dead tired.
2) My aunt and uncle have been in c…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Lots of Crazy Keapeefers in the forum Poetry 8 years ago
@daughteroftheking @valtmy @daeus *bows as confetti rains on one and all* Thank you! Thank you!
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Kaya Young replied to the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
@valtmy Cool! This story is sounding really intriguing! You could create some super dramatic scenes with “Fate” and “Rules”. Maybe you could start to change genres by making the rules of Fate overarc into politics, family relationships and such?
What a fun story. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
@kaya-young I pictured the Rules of Fate as more of someone’s silly idea of what they should be, or what generally happens as a sort of “poetic justice,” not some actual rules of the universe. @valtmy is that correct?
By the way, I thought it was very funny and cute. 🙂 I like it.
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