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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@valtmy No worries 😀
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@jenwriter17 It’s just part, but yay! Now I have to rewrite entire chapters and add some action. *nods* My book needs more action toward the beginning.
Thanks!@rochellaine @seekjustice @valtmy @dekreel I’ll be doing some writing/rewriting in a few minutes. So I’m here. 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@catwing I’m not sure. 😉
Farewell!
@seekjustice Why thank you! I love it when I make good arguments, 😛
True romance shall live on!
@jenwriter17 @alia @valtmy I am going to be leaving now, Goodnight everyone!
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@Rochellaine Also the dwarves brought him to the coffin right?
@seekjustice I can make more points tomorrow.
@jenwriter17 @valtmy @alia I am going to sleep. Good night. I finished this edit stage! *throws feathers* Rewriting tomorrow. ^.^
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice @catwing @rochellaine @valtmy Anyone still on?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice I count “first sight” as first conversation or so. You can tell millions about a person’s personality from the way they dress, stand, and walk, and you can tell some about their beliefs and morals from the location you find them.
…honestly, if a guy came up to me and sang me a song like Phillip and Florian did, I’d have a pretty…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
The opinions are quite divided 😀
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine They are adorable. 😉 (Hope you hand is better soon)
Currently they are 7 & 9 months (You may think of what I thought when I was thinking about that. XP), a doeling and a wether.
They’re fun. One was rubbing her head against my hand. If I can teach her to do it on cue… Fist/face bump! 😛
But they are not a horse… ;P
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
Well, I should be researching the French Revolution, but instead I’m sick in bed reading about whether or not Disney princesses are bad for girls. Are any of you guys watchers of Disney?
@rochellaine WHOOOHOOOO
@alia Very good 😛 That’ll make you cry all the more!
@catwing how’s your editing?
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice @rochellaine @dekreel @valtmy @jenwriter17 I’m doing some more comment fixing. And guess what? My family got goats today. They are cute (maybe partly because they are young). 😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
No, I didn’t think so 😀 I’ve actually read a bit about the real strike, but not much. And they definitely are good dancers 🙂 Goodnight!
@valtmy And I guess I wouldn’t want to be one of my characters either!
I think I should probably go and do something with my day 😛
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice Not by a long shot!!!! 😛 I was just using that as an example. Actually the most noticeable inaccuracy is that the real newsboys’ average age was probably around ten or twelve, so the sixteen- to twenty-year-old guys seem quite strange.
…but they’re good dancers! 😛
@valtmy Actually, since yours is a parody in the first place, I…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
I would not enjoy being a parent in your book 🙁 🙁 🙁
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@valtmy Haha! 😛 Don’t worry, I don’t think I will. But yeah, that’s me. I get so horribly annoyed if the actors say a slang word that wasn’t invented yet, (talking about Newsies, @seekjustice ) if the skirts are two inches too short or too long, (can’t always tell, except for a few specific periods) or especially if the characters act like m…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
You’re a parent-murderer??? *gasps of shock* 😀
Maybe you’re just picky, but me too. Unless I really like something, as in the case of Anastasia. However, you would hate The Greatest Showman, because my biggest complaint with it is how historically inaccurate it is, including, but no limited to, the fact that there is an…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustive Oh, I don’t know. I thought of a couple when writing that, but my brain is mixed up now and I can only remember one:
Rose Marie (1936) Is a musical about an opera singer who goes to the wilds of Canada in search of her brother. A huge climax near the end of the film involves her having a mental breakdown during an opera p…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
Fine, three. 😛
And yeah, Carlotta usually has a much more operatic voice, though I don’t whether she’s usually played by women with operatic training.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
Whoops! I literally write your name on autopilot now 😀
@valtmy sorry! See above 😀 (I accidentally tagged Rochellaine instead of you!)
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice You replied to @valtmy‘s post, but tagged me. 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@valtmy Yep, they are! That’s why I was proud of myself for only killing two 😛
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