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@seekjustice It’s okay.  I was only here for a few minutes anyway and then I left.  I’m back now, though.  How are you doing?  Oh yeah, I already asked that…Okay, what are you working on? 😛

@valtmy Ah, that makes sense.  Yes, half of my problem was that she was doing it in public.  Like I said, if she’d taken the other girl aside and said…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Sorry, I got distracted 😉 I’m back now!

@valtmy

Hello!

@valtmy Haha, I was on your document right before you got here, and replied to one of your comments. 😉

Well, that will make me happier. 😀  Weren’t there other readers who liked that part, though?

@valtmy @dekreel @jenwriter17 @rochellaine @alia @catwing

Anyone around?

@dekreel @valtmy Well, I’m going to say goodnight now.  See you later!

@valtmy Well, I think it could be both.  I did notice a distinct similarity, but since I didn’t realize you were the author of the other, I wasn’t sure why. 😛  It’s also partially because I haven’t read many stories set in East Asia, so I related the stories in that aspect as well. 😉

@valtmy Haha, apparently I’m having the same trouble with Daughter of Judas. 😛  Trying to keep the customs and culture of the times, while making it not confusing and freaky to a modern audience is certainly difficult.

Well, of course. 😛  And no, you haven’t been portraying it as a positive thing, but you have been portraying it as sort of t…[Read more]

@valtmy That’s what happened to my western, unfortunately. 🙁  I definitely haven’t quit it, but I had to take a break because I wasn’t getting anywhere with it.

Ok, I went back and replied to your age question.  I didn’t see what other questions you had asked, though.  What were they?

@seekjustice Are you back from church yet?  What do you thi…[Read more]

@valtmy  I’m glad your writing is going well!! 😀 😀

(I’m not trying to imply that I’m glad you keep disappearing, by the way… XD)

@dekreel Okay. Thanks!

@rochellaine @valtmy I must go to sleep now. good night.

@valtmy Thank you so much!  That’s very helpful. 😀

Have you convinced yourself to start working on your own project yet? 😛  You said you were having trouble with that.

@dekreel Aw, Kai. 😀  Hey, are you reading the first draft or the second draft?  (This is a VERY important question.)  😛  You’ll find out who he is soon enough.  He’s not my…[Read more]

@valtmy  @catwing  @rochellaine  @seekjustice  @whoever

Oy! I’m beta-reading again!

@catwing Continuing our earlier conversation, I didn’t realize that was the kind of prayer shawls you were talking about. 😛  I thought you were talking about men’s prayer shawls, like in Fiddler on the Roof.  So do you mean that the women wore different prayer shawls from their everyday head coverings, (or veils, as I called it in my story,) w…[Read more]

@rochellaine @valtmy I’m here doing a bit of writing.

@valtmy Thanks, I’ll take a look. 🙂

Well, I have one more thing.  You asked about what was going on with the guys, and said I didn’t give enough info.  I had written a parallel scene from the guys’ perspective, but just set it aside because I really, really want to have only Bathshua’s POV in this.  However, if you like you could take a look at…[Read more]

@valtmy Hey!  How’s it going?

@valtmy Thanks!  I think I will try to make it a little less obvious.  Thank you so much for all the ideas and comments!  They’re very helpful.

Haha. 😛  I love a good brother and sister relationship, so I’m afraid I don’t appreciate the scenes with your MC’s brother at all. 😉

@dekreel You should. 😉

I’m not beta-reading @seekjustice book. I am waiting for her to send it out. Waiting. 🙂 (But I’m working my book some. ;P )

I got distracted and decided to take a summer break. I can’t remember if it was the short story contest at my library or the 4th of July parade that distracted me… Also I’m thinking about getting…[Read more]

@valtmy  That’s all right. Good night!

@rochellaine  Hello! Yeah, yeah, I miss you, too. 😉

How are you doing? Sorry I disappeared last time. I sorta drifted off.

@catwing @valtmy @seekjustice Hey, I’m back!

@dekreel Hi!!!  How are you doing??  You’re actually here!! 😀 😀 😀 (I’m going to keep being overly excited every time you show up until you make it a frequent occurrence. 😉 )