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@seekjustice @rochellaine @catwing @dekreel @alia

ANYONE ON?! I’m trying to edit some graphics for my new site design, and it’s frustrating/confusing/tiring so I’m looking for someone to talk to to brighten my mood and distract a bit from the work. 🙂

@seekjustice,

I finished reading your prologue. I really like it! I really like your writing…[Read more]

@rochellaine

And I’ve been meaning to ask you: how’s Bathshua going? and is Yishay still alive?

@rochellaine

Ah, that’s a good point 😉

Oh, and no. I haven’t listened to the soundtrack yet. I haven’t heard a lot good about the movie, but I will give it a chance eventually.

Yeah, it’s going well. I have need of your wisdom though. Which scene is more gripping/powerful out of the scene where Justice tells Chessy he’s found the person who…[Read more]

@seekjustice

The thing I love about rainy days is that I know several songs about rain and overcast skies, so I can sing the songs on those days. 😛

Cool.  Is it going okay so far?

@rochellaine

Well, we like rainy days here, but when it’s just overcast? No benefits of rain, and there’s no sun, so it’s all round loss.

I’m making some changes, but I recently read an article which advocated for editing out of order in some cases, so I decided to try it.

@seekjustice

I guess that’s a nice change from the heat.  Though overcast days aren’t all that exciting.  Haha, we usually say that about Maryland weather, since we’re in the middle, not too cold and not too hot, so it’s often very random.

Great!  What sort of edits are you doing?  Are you going through chapter by chapter, or are you just ran…[Read more]

@rochellaine

I hate when that happens 😛

It’s been so hot all summer, but today it’s really cooled down. I don’t why, it’s just overcast and a bit rainy and weird. Australian weather for you.

I’m editing SFI!

@seekjustice I’m back!

I tried to post a few minutes ago, but my computer wouldn’t load the page, so I have to start over.

How are you doing?  Is it still unreasonably hot in Australia? 😉

Are you working on anything in particular right now?

@rochellaine

I can’t wait 😀

it has been a while!

@seekjustice It’s time for family worship now.  I’ll be back in probably fifteen or twenty minutes, and then I should be able to be on for a while!

Finally we’ll get to talk! It’s been quite a bit. 😀

@rochellaine Yes I’m here! My family’s gone into town today, so I’m all by myself for a few glorious hours and I’m trying to get some editing done 😀

@seekjustice I’m finally here. 😛  Are you still anywhere around?

@jenwriter17

Okay. I’ll talk to you in a bit then 😀

@rochellaine

Are you around this fine afternoon/night?

@seekjustice

😀

Well, I look forward to reading it in the future then. 😉

I have to leave for a bit. I’m not sure if I’ll come back later or not. But I’ll finish reading your prologue and let you know what I think soon. 😉

@jenwriter17

It’s *cough* coming along nicely…*whistles innocently and tries to escape*

I’m hoping to write it in April anyway 😛

@seekjustice

WHAT YOU CHANGED JEAN’S NAME??? I’ll have to see about this… 😉 Reading it now…

How is the third SFI book coming along? Are you just in the outlining/planning stage right now?

@jenwriter17

Well, I’ve actually rewritten it since Valtmy and Rochellaine read it anyway, though I didn’t change it that much. So you can have another read of it, if you’d like. Tell me what you think (and also what you think of Jean’s new name?)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T-tYVuU9CwMBJJgt4MIpkXj9fScSA3Z06DttCofZShk/edit?usp=sharing

@seekjustice

Oh, yes ballet! That must’ve been what I was thinking of. 🙂 I used to do ballet too.

😀 Hmm, I feel like I might have read a part you rewrote, may have been the prologue. But I’ll gladly take a look at it to check and make sure. 🙂

@jenwriter17

Yes, he’s very adorable 😀

No (i’d love to), I do ballets though, and I love those!

I will neither confirm nor deny 😛 But it reminds me. I completely rewrote the prologue, and both Valtmy and Rochellaine have read a version of it, but I’m pretty sure you haven’t. Would you like to take a look?

@seekjustice

Aw, labradors are cute. 🙂 <3

Do you act in plays? I thought you had mentioned that in the past maybe…

So this editing you’re doing…would that be SFI? *fangirl squeal*