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valtmy replied to the topic Making Up Words in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 2 months ago
If your magic system is based around moving stuff about, maybe you can look up synonyms and terms involving transportation, conveyance, delivery etc.? Reseaching words that describe the different realms and nature of things (physical, mental, emotional, spiritual) can also help you find ways to describe and differentiate the…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Magic System Idea and Time Loops in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 2 months ago
Thanks for your suggestions! You guys have given me much to think about. It will take some time for me to process everything so perhaps I should go into detail about the different issues I am encountering. This may help me think this through more clearly and come to a…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Contemporary Western Novel in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Yes, I think it works best as as scene that Chara remembers instead of putting it in the beginning. Maybe when Chara is at the “bottom of her self-reliance ability”, she can think about how stuff like this always happens to her and have her flashback to give an example. Then to make her background clear and make Chara appear as a…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Contemporary Western Novel in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Haha sorry about coming across as wanting to give stress to poor Chara. I have a habit of stressing out my own characters, especially at the beginning of my stories where I need to kickstart the plot so that was just where my mind went. 🙂
The problem I had as a reader was that I don’t particularly feel a need for Chara to change,…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Contemporary Western Novel in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hi. I’ve read your opening. Chara is a very relatable character (since I have height issues myself) and the part where she got blown back was very cute and funny. I think your story has a lot of potential to be a nice, relaxing and refreshing read amidst all the overdramatic and fantastical plots nowadays. A realistic “journey”…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic What Do You Think Of? in the forum Historical 8 years, 2 months ago
Medieval: Knights, tournaments, castles, swords, minstrels, chivalric romance. Not to mention serfs and primae noctis.
Dark Ages: The Plague. Lots of filth. That’s pretty much it.
OK, to be serious, I think most periods in real life history that are referred to as a “dark age” were actually preceded by rather advanced civilizations. But after…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Character Dilemma! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Hmm… Personally when I find myself writing stories which I do not like even though it starred characters which I loved, the problem was that I was taking a plot-driven approach when a character-driven one would have been more appropriate. I was too fixated on the idea of certain plot events happening (a fight, a confrontation, a…[Read more]
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valtmy started the topic Magic System Idea and Time Loops in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey guys. I am looking for help from anyone who knows anything about writing magical systems and time loops.
I have an idea for a story that will use an elemental magic system that I have created but I am encountering problems with even making basic decisions regarding the plot and characters because of some details that I have yet to work…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writing Advice Short Quotes in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Great quotes!
Hmm what comes to mind is this from William Faulkner:
“The only thing worth writing about is the human heart in conflict with itself.”
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valtmy replied to the topic Infant and Child Characters in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
Thanks so much guys! All your tips and suggestions have been very helpful. I will take note of them and let you know if I have any other questions.
The wooden box itself is actually a specially designed “backpack” used for carrying valuable items that people don’t want to…[Read more]
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valtmy started the topic Infant and Child Characters in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
Hi! 🙂
So I am writing a supporting character who would grow from a baby to a child in my story. The growth of this character is crucial in driving the plot, highlighting the theme and developing the other characters so I don’t exactly have the option of deleting him or making him older. But I don’t have much experience with kids (youngest in my…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
Nice to meet you and Stan! Great to know that you find my story interesting.
You and @dragon-snapper have no need to worry about any sort of INTJ rebellion. It will go against our whole ethos to behave recklessly or take any action that would be detrimental to our long-term interests.
*whispering* All right. I s…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 3 months ago
Dragons?! Well, you’re going to have to offer something more concrete to get me to join the revolt against King @daeus . Like what is this “new system” you are planning to enact? More importantly, what salaries and benefits am I going to get?
If you’re interested in anime, I would recommend Psycho Pass (first season only) to…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 3 months ago
Nice to meet a fellow INTJ! Lol what is this revolution even about?
Well anime refers to animated series that are made in Japan which are often based off manga or light novels. Totoro and Spirited Away are Japanese animated works so maybe they count? I am not sure if they are disqualified just because they are films.
I suppose…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 3 months ago
Haha is it that hard to find people who have watched Studio Ghibli? I would consider them to be a very famous animation studio.
I have seen Spirited Away, Princess Mononoke, Howl’s Moving Castle, Laputa, Totoro, Kiki’s Delivery Service, Porco Rosso, Nausicaa, Whisper of the Heart and Tale of Princess Kaguya. I like Spirited Away and…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 3 months ago
I love JoJo’s Bizarre Adventure because of its fast pace, crazy awesomeness and very unique tone! Yes, you should check out the others if you have the time. I specifically mentioned those few because of their stellar storytelling in the sea of subpar anime. 🙂
Great to know there are other writers who have similar…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 3 months ago
Yes, I think there is something about writing and the joy of creation that draws certain personality types more than others!
Glad you like my story idea! My imagination tends to go towards the crazy when giving me ideas. I guess I just wanted to write a strong female protagonist without it becoming a typical “I can…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 3 months ago
Instrumentals. Scores and soundtracks from films and musicals mostly.
I usually watch romantic comedies and fusion sagueks. So Korean dramas like Princess Hours, Sungkyunkwan Scandal etc.
Aww… There’s no need to be afraid of us INTJs! We are like cacti; intimidating, tough and resilient on the outside but actually being…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 3 months ago
I prefer instrumentals since a lot of lyrics do not really appeal to me. I listen mostly to soundtracks and scores from shows and musicals since I feel that they offer more variety than mainstream genres. I also listen to classical sometimes, especially Tchaikovsky. A relic from my childhood piano and music lessons.
As for my current…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 3 months ago
You’re from Taiwan? I love Taiwan! The bubble tea and desserts you have there are amazing! 🙂
I am an INTJ. For books I enjoy reading Lewis, Austen and Pratchett (I know he was an atheist but I can see behind his words a great spiritual yearning which he himself may not have realised).
I studied Business. Am still…[Read more]
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