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@alia @seekjustice

Praying!

@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia @catwing @jenwriter17

Hey I’m off work today so I’ll be here working on my WIP and beta reading…

@seekjustice

Not working on anything now. Just have some time to chat during lunch. Thankfully, it’s a break tomorrow so I can do more writing then! 😀

By the way, for the beta reading for SFI, I’m sorry I know the deadline is end September. But I’m trying to get it done as fast as possible (as in by this week) because I don’t think I will have…[Read more]

@seekjustice

Hey will be here for about half an hour…

@rochellaine @seekjustice @alia @catwing @jenwriter17

Hey. I’ll be on a while (not writing though) but will most likely disappear again. Please don’t mind.

@catwing

Hi!

@rochellaine

Is it a comedy as well? It’s not the fake death one right?

By the way here’s a warning that I may disappear again. Who knows when work will come? 😛

@rochellaine

Ah. You just reminded me that I should be looking out for some nude shoes that I can wear for a wedding and later use for work too. 😛

Ooh another short story?

@rochellaine

I’m here! Not writing though. Just reading through some stuff for work.

@seekjustice

Oh right wanted to ask: I signed up to be one of your beta readers… So is it confirmed that I am going to be one?

@rochellaine

For your historical accuracy comment, they are only talking about copyright laws. Copyright does not exist yet. So it’s not historically inaccurate. Yet. 😛

I am actually merging Korean culture with…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Yep. It was funny but I agree that it’s a little too mean (even given the sort of person my MC’s brother is) and my MC should be trying to come across as a proper lady at that moment so insulting a family member like that does not fit with the image.

@seekjustice @rochellaine

I’ll be here before work.

Rochellaine, thanks for your comments in my doc. I’ve replied so you can go take a look. I’ve decided to remove that part with my MC’s brother. The whole issue with that is that my MC and her brother are really, really not supposed to be looked up to by the readers anyway so I thought that that…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Haha does that mean I have a distinctive writing style? Or that my stories are too similar in inspiration and tone?

I think QOD and ROF will end being similar in tone but the stories will be very different. QOD features a female MC who loves romance and whose story is more of one of drama and personal growth. ROF will feature a male…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Oh. My other question had to do with the “When she did” line which you apparently have no idea how to rephrase too. 😛

For my MC’s age… I don’t think I am going to change it. But I think I would insert a line somewhere saying that the actual marriage is not going to take place until years later (sigh, catering to the delicate…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Haha. I have phases where I fall in love and out of love with my own projects. I’ve been rereading what I’ve written so far for my WIP to encourage myself to push forward. 😛

Oh by the way, there are some questions I asked you in response to your comments in my doc. Some of them are still bothering me especially the one with regard…[Read more]

@rochellaine

OK I’ve put in my suggestions in the doc.

@rochellaine

I didn’t say you didn’t give enough info. I understood the “going to be late” thing was something that the reader doesn’t need to know now. It’s just jarring that this guy doesn’t know who Bathshua is but this other guy with him somehow does so I think an explanation is needed for that.

Sure I’ll be happy to take a look at your…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Hey. Just trying to get the motivation to start 😛

I’ve replied to your replies to my comments in your doc. Are there any other questions you want to ask me?

@rochellaine @catwing @dekreel

I’m here now.

@rochellaine

Hey. Not sure when you’ll be back but I’ll put my answer to your first question here before I go:

1. You found out Yishay very quickly. Would it be more interesting if it were not so obvious, or is it fine as it is? If I had him just go to his house and wait for Bathshua would that make it harder to figure out? But that seems quite…[Read more]

@dekreel @catwing

Hey. Really sorry but I have to leave now. 🙁