@trailblazer
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @mineralizedwritings @acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @I-think-I-got_everyone-XD
Oh and just so everyone knows, Amir is wearing a tan, robe-like outfit that looks wrapped around his body. But instead of being a robe all the way through, the lower section splits off into wide-legged pants. He’s wearing soft s…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Mormon is the nick name for the Church, so there isn’t really any difference😂 That being said, we prefer to use the true name of the Church, because it expresses that we worship Christ, and that He is the core of the Gospel, many think we worship Mormon, when we don’t. Mormon is regarded as a great profit of God, but this isn’t…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
I suppose that’s a working explanation. Where Christ is the solid, the Holy Spirit is the liquid, and Heavenly Father is gas, expressing the hierarchy of God’s physical manifestation. Both solid and liquid are confined to this earth, whereas gas can permeate through all of space. I like that explanation more than the egg one.
Once…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@grcr @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @trailblazer @anyone-else
Here’s the 6th chapter! I haven’t posted new ones in a while so I thought I should post my favorite chapter!!!! 😁 It’s really sad but also a little
romantic .Any feedback would be appreciated!Chapter 6: Hiding
Triggers: Abuse, a punch
“Sef!”
Sef heard the door crash open upst…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@jonas @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @trailblazer @anyone-else (if you don’t want to read it that’s fine so just because I tagged you doesn’t mean you have to 😁
Next chapter:
Chapter 6: Hiding
Triggers: Abuse
“Sef!”
Sef heard the door crash open upstairs and began to panic. It was late, and the odds that Iver had not been drinking were nex…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
That’s nice! I love Kari’s story, and I love how Kari might be able to prove Ottoline wrong. This whole thing is great (I know I’ve said that so many times, but I mean it more every single time)! And yes, Hottoline is great haha yeah, i get being super tired.
Yay!!! you’re back!!!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, I see what your getting at. It’s a reasonable enough explanation. Where your saying Christ and the Holy Spirit swapped places, and the Holy Spirit is the aspect of God that is enveloping the Earth.
So the Holy Ghost is specifically the spirit of Jesus Christ, while still being the same spirit as the Father in a grander sense,…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Thank goodness!
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings (I guess I’ll tag you again lol)
Alright! I am here!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @trailblazer
Yall. I just realized my entire last rp didn’t upload… but I had it backed up in a word document! I hardly ever do that XD!!
Kaine
Kaine shudders, crossing his arms over his dark green sweater vest. A stiff breeze edges through the tight weave of his shirt, pushing…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I like it!
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Sorry Ottoline’s so rude to Kari, haha! Hopefully Kari can help her work through some hard things, and help her know God (though in Ottoline’s world He’s known as the Great One). Poor girl’s been through a lot, and Kari seems like a nice person!
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@everyone @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @grcr @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings
Ottoline
She was done with this place. She had looked out the windows and saw the sun sinking lower in the sky…and if she was being honest with herself, this place was creeping her out. It reminded her of the UNIT, that feeling of…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@grcr @minerlaizedwritings @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c
Aright, Hugo is going to join! Sorry if anyone characters are different from what they really would be like, its sorta hard to write them. 🙂
Hugo
Hugo trudged up a hill as the sun beat down on his back, “Where the heck am I going?” He thought, “wander awa…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, I’m a member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints, and we believe that Heavenly Father, the Holy Ghost, and Jesus Christ are three distinct beings, though they are indeed one in purpose. (Please don’t burn me at the stake😅)
Yeah, absolutely, that’s the mentality that I strive for in…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Me too XD and a new teacher, yay! I’m excited to see what happens next 😁
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I love the story! I agree with @hybridlore that it wasn’t too summary-y but it would be nice to see how the interaction with Lillian Sara and Jennie went.
I love the dancing scene! I love Libbie and Albert, they’re so cute together! (It’s fine if that’s not what you’re going for but I just like “shipping” people in my stories and…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@trailblazer @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @grcr
Ottoline
She sighed with relief as Lane looked away from her scars and turned his attention to the girl in the doorway. But she knew it was only a matter of time before they would get brought up.
“Oh, no, it’s not my statue, or my house even…” the bewildered girl…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
Great! 😆
Lane
Lane looked at Ottoline, accessing what kind of person she was. His eyes fell on her scars, and it reminded him of one of his friends back where he lived. His face vividly displayed a desire to ask about the scars, but he changed his…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
Got it, lol!
Lane
He listened silently as the two people exchanged a few words.
I should probably find out where I am…
Lane shivered before he stepped inside the building. He slowly walked to a small statue in the corner of the room. He reached…[Read more]
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