Trailblazer

@keilah-h

lol XD XD

@ellette-giselle

That’s funny XD

I can hardly ever write in the morning…

Would right after lunch work for you most days? Also, what time zone are you in? I’m in mountain time. (It’s almost 12:30 right now) That’s when I’m on break for work. (I live on a farm and work for my dad)

@ellette-giselle

Okay!!! Do you ever write in the evening? That’s when I do most of my writing XD

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, and then if I’m available we can do it together!

@ellette-giselle

If you go back to the first page, it explains everything! but basically it’s where you pick a time and write until that time as fast as you can. It keeps you accountable, focused, and you can make a lot of progress that way!

@ellette-giselle

Hey, I know you’re available to write a lot, would you want to do this together???

@ellette-giselle

Yay! I’m so excited to see how they turn out!!

Woah… why is her’s so big?? XD

Hallie

Easton (I forgot to say he has glasses xp)

@ellette-giselle

Ooh, this looks so cool! I’d love if you could do a brother and sister for me!

Name: Easton Woodbury

Age: 17

Gender: male

Clothing: long-sleeved sweater, light or dark jeans, sneakers(?)

Time period (Or the time period the fashion replicates): 90s!

Physical appearance: 6’ 0’’; light skin; gray eyes; dirty blonde/light…[Read more]

@esther-c

You’re good!!!  (: I’ve been busy too!

Livia

It helped her to know that someone cared, that she wasn’t alone…she held tight to Lukas’s hands as if it was the only stable thing in her life…and it might as well have been.

“How do you feel now?” Lukas asked her.

Liv hated to disappoint him, but she simply didn’t have the strong…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Huh…interesting!

@savannah_grace2009

(Sorry I took forever to reply!! Life has been busy and I’m doing the King’s Daughters’ Writing Camp this month)

Lukas

Lukas bit his lip, his gaze roaming the ground as if searching for an answer in the dirt. “W-well, I don’t think H-He’d just stop listening…” he wet his lips. “B-but I can pray for you if-if you want.”…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

well, I can say personally that I get annoyed with books that have a complex plot and also make you figure out what the world is and whats going on. I would really prefer to know more. It could be informative where you just tell the reader, or it could be something like one of the kids asking a question and an adult explaining…

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@whalekeeper

Alriiight, Chapter 1. Please tell me if you get overwhelmed with all the feedback, because if that happens, I will gladly pause.

I was overwhelmed a bit, but you don’t have to pause, I just needed a day to process everything haha!

Sooo I get this weird feeling about Nico. I’m not entirely convinced he doesn’t love them, nor do I kno…

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@jonas

Ugh…I feel like I keep saying things I will regret later XD

Why are you so good at this??? You need to be an editor someday lol

I do have one more question regarding this. If the Andromedans so universally despise and hate Paynes, then where do you get the people who are willing to marry a human and become Paynes themselves?

Before the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

The only thing I would say was when it said Cassian “ran, trying to outrun himself”

Actually it was “Cassian ran, trying to outrun time itself”.

That still might grate a little bit because of ran/outrun, so I changed it a little bit.

Also, from the perspective of someone who doesn’t know the full story and really is like a reade…

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