Trailblazer

@ellette-giselle  @esther-c

A continuation of my previous snowball writing :

“You ready, Buddy?”

A sigh escaped Buddy’s lips before he could stop it.

A chuckle sounded from behind him.

“To tell the truth, Butch, I’m as nervous as a…” he searched for an applicable metaphor. “As a wave that’s tossed to and fro.”

Butch came to stand next to him…

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@ellette-giselle They’re all Christians??

Where do you find all your pictures for these?

@ellette-giselle Aww, I love it!! She looks so sweet.

@esther-c @liberty @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 SNOWBALLS!!

@ellette-giselle

anyone want to see another?

YESSSS!!!!!! Please.

Thanks! What do you mean? Like how am I putting it together? I do that on Canva.

Yes, how you put it together. Okay, thanks! I’ve been thinking of making some for my Wip.

@whalekeeper

She’d definitely want to know if someone else was describing him like that 😳😂

@whalekeeper

Oh yes… 😏 He’s one of the MCs in my current WIP, but this snippet was from the POV of his girlfriend (pretty much fiancée, let’s be real gang). 😜

🫸🏻⚪️ @liberty

🫸🏻⚪️ @savannah_grace2009

Forgot about my snowballs, but got them written! I know I don’t have to share a snippet buuuuut….. I really want to. 🤣 So here you go:
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“Don’t try to turn her down.” Mrs. Palmer stood beside me, a knowing smile on her lips.

“Who?”

“Marzia. This is her way of accepting you into the family. She’ll be offended if you don’t let her spoil you.”…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

It’s beautiful! What are you using to make them?

@ellette-giselle OOH! Looks cool! 😁

@liberty I would say yes, but it’s kind of fun to watch as they multiply from the original two, and eventually we’ll get to the point where we have a lot flying. So no, sorry. You’re welcome to ask for tags though.

@ellette-giselle

I’d love feedback on the blurb. I want it to catch your attention, but not give too much away. Here you go.

WOW. Yes, it has totally caught my attention, and I’m hooked! It sounds very interesting. I think you wrote it quite well. It’s not too long and doesn’t give much away, but it offers the readers a huge tasty donut to hook o…[Read more]

@koshka

Have you ever heard of the six word story? I don’t remember who wrote it, but one of his friends challenged him to write the shortest story ever. He replied with “Baby shoes for sale. Never worn.”

That seriously sounds like a heap of fun! It’s actually a good exercise to try writing very concisely. I think I’ll try this out.…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

A girl in red plaid sits in the college library. Dreadful words – Assignment Due Tomorrow and Proyecto de Clase de Español? -waltz across the screen before her weary eyes. Those words have no business in libraries. Her sanctuary is become her prison. She sighs and clicks on her phone.

Smack

A wet clod of wintery chill flies in…

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@ellette-giselle

I guess I was sort of confused by Joseph’s fears about talking to Ezra, then. He seems to have multiple flashbacks to the soldiers, which is a good way to show how the events have affected him. I was probably confused (I’m assuming now that this scene is replacing the one before where he talks to three young men) about why he was…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Your new blurb sounds so cool! 😍

I don’t eat bananas either, but when I do they have to be a little after the bright all yellow… like beginning to soften (and barely turn brown, not too brown at all).

@ellette-giselle

I like it a lot! The only things I noticed were that you included the long excerpt from the Bible again… most readers already know the Christmas story so I don’t think you need it in there. Then, also, when Amelia was talking about Mary, some of the tenses seemed wrong. Like, maybe it should be in past tense? Idk. And last thi…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Netflix was going to make a movie or television series more recently, but there hasn’t been any news in a couple years.

Yes, I heard about that, but then nothing more came out!

We watched a little bit of that cartoon recently, lol. Redwall was such a phase for me when I was 10-12; I read almost all the books, and I thinky favorite w…

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