Trailblazer

@the_lost-journal

Oh nice, a topic for your WIPs! *subscribes*

Which one of your works is Carrot Cake from?

@savannah_grace2009

*exhale* 

Snap doodle.

Just finished reading through all your chapters… man, I dont even know what to say…

Must read moreeeeee. WRITE WRITE WRITE!

Eloy is my favorite… Aubrielle is probably second. And, since he hasn’t done anything yet that I can see, Cassian is also a fav.

Liviaaaa, you be lusting, girlie…c…[Read more]

@keilah-h

yes, actually!!!!!

I think I have a couple more chapters since you last read it!!!

@keilah-h

aw yesss

@keilah-h

I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…

It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3

@whalekeeper

Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

Ummmm

Let me think lol

I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol

And character development ideas would be helpful too!!

I also just want to know t…[Read more]

LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????

Yeah lol

you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD

The frog wedding is adorable.

I KNOWWWW

YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!

no comment….

@ellette-giselle

Great! That’s a great trope to break.

Ernst is the name of Josef’s son in CR, right?

@theducktator

 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

😱😱😱😱

*sobs hysterically*

Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

yesssss

*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

@ellette-giselle

I just read your latest section. I was struck by how German their names are!😂 And…you created another Ernst?

Haha! I’ve had others complain that the wolves DIDN’T attack! XD.

Then, I’m extremely glad I told you my input. The animals do not have to attack every single time! *shaking head* So unrealistic.

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Perhaps I’ll share it on here if i ever follow through with anything…

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@ellette-giselle

My thoughts on Section 2:

“We don’t believe in the gods of the Empire,” Julian cut in.

There was a stunned silence.

“We worship the One true God,” Julian explained.

I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Ju…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Does this mean we won’t get a new section today? 🥺

A possible option for them is to say they prefer worshipping in private, then they’ll obviously worship God and not the idols. But that is pretty close to a lie already and I don’t see that working more than once or twice. Probably the best thing for them to do is to just tell them.

@ellette-giselle

I think it’s fine. They have to, in this instance, instead of just jumping at it when they don’t need to. Since Elishavet was the one who pointed that out, I would wait to see what she thinks, but I think that it’s fine.

@ellette-giselle

Yes?

@theshadow

Emery, Colin, Jehan, Girard, Philippe, Lorin, Perrin, Nicolas, Richart and Olivier are French.

Some German ones are Alexander, Konrad, Hermann, Heinrich, Emmerich, Berthold, and Christian.

Um, yes!! I would love to see aesthetics!! You don’t even have to ask, girl. XD

@stephie

That’s awesome!! Praise the Lord!