Trailblazer

@liberty

XD Yeah, poor Dale. That was a lot of snow in his mouth at the end.

@ellette-giselle

He already is. 😉

Oh boy . . . XD *whispers* What did I just get myself into…

Soo… is it pronounced to rhyme with bay-lick?

@ellette-giselle

Awesome! Which tent did you join?

@hybridlore

Thanks! I really need to help Dale recover…he’s turning into a pessimist…but don’t worry! He’ll recover and find joy again. 🤭

@linus-smallprint

Pronounced the same as Alec?

I was saying it “ay-lec” in my head, but I don’t know if that’s accurate.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, it gave me very . . . Socratic-discussion vibes. But it was great. That’s funny, I also like to debate… slightly lol. It’s a little stressful.

I don’t know, I just like him. He’s funny and impulsive (li…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I love it!!! Julian is amazing. The debating scene was a nice change from how they’ve had to speak to others in the past.

@ellette-giselle

Weird. Are you on the home page where it shows you all the topics?

@ellette-giselle

So, the website isn’t loading for me. But I know they send out a video with help to figure out how to navigate stuff. I know it’s super overwhelming the first day, but you’ll figure it out in no time.

@esther-c

Love it! The ending is intriguing. 😉

@ellette-giselle @esther-c @liberty

I guess the Chickadee tent was filled all the way, or they’re not doing it this year? I’m in Sunrise Peak

@liberty @ellette-giselle

Yay!! I’ll see you guys there!! 😁

Liberty, great section! 😂

@ellette-giselle

Lol.

@ellette-giselle

Yes! I did. I haven’t gotten to it yet…I’m working through some things at home right now…but I may be able to read it within the next few days.

@ellette-giselle

*chuckling*

YES!!!! I’m planning to join the Brookside Stories. I loved the title. Do you want to join that one? What name are you going under? I’m using Liberty D.

@hybridlore

Wait…is that tent already filled? I can’t see it as one of the tents to pick.

@hybridlore

I will ask to join that tent!

@hybridlore

I would love LOVE to join that writing camp!

@hybridlore FINALLY!!!!!!! The next and last part of -Snowballs- is here! Thanks for reminding this procrastinating person.

Anyway…I am planning to write a sequel…just because Dale has had such a hard time! (I feel so bad for him…poor boy) So, I’m hoping to write another story where he’s recovered from his trauma and is having a good t…[Read more]

@esther-c

Sorry I’m just now getting to this!!!!

My main critique would be that you spend a lot of time on dialogue. I kind of feel like we just got thrown into the story and all we know about the characters is because of what they say. Maybe breaking up some dialogue and really showing us who they characters are would help…it kind of feels l…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Poor Highscribe. What did you do to her?

@ellette-giselle

Leon is definitely more confident and the leader. It feels like Julian looks to him and gets more concerned about things. And Julian likes to make quips. That was just what I think I noticed from this chapter.