@trailblazer
Active 1 month, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Ahhhh, ok. Yeah that sounds less scary. Very interesting.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
lol sounds good! I’ll start on him today!
I am glad you stopped…
Lol what does that mean? I messed up pretty bad, eh? 😂
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
😅 Here is what i started… you may not find it to be that creepy but yeah… eh.
I think i messed up a little—like he needed to hang more rathe…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh my goodness I have been trying to log into KP and it hasn’t been working ahh thank goodness its finally working what is wrong with it what is going on why in the world have I been locked out whaaaaa???????? 😭😭😮💨🤧
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Well, I’m glad it comes through! I don’t even know what I’m doing… I just pray and try to picture it.
Okay, good. I was trying to put foreshadowing and hints in the chapters before so that it’d all make sense, but since the story was still forming at some stages (Chapter 4, I think, the one where Alec comes home for dinner, n…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Aw, Ellette, I don’t even really know what to say. I’m so, so glad you like it! Thank you for all the encouragement!
I want this made into a MOVIE!!
Every author’s not-so-secret dream xD
Yeah, poor Everett. It’d be a challenge for sure.
So… was it obvious before this chapter what Alec did for his job? Do you feel like you have…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Of course!! 🥰 I’m glad it’s all coming together so quickly!
Yep xD No problem.
Aw, so glad I could help! 💕💕
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Thank you so much!!!!
I fixed the spelling!! Thanks for catching that XD
I appreciate you so so SO much, girl <3 -
hybridlore replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
It looks great, Sara! I didn’t read the sixth story, but I enjoyed the other new ones. The order seemed to work pretty well, and I thought it was great that you added an introduction to explain the stories before jumping in. Just one note–the afterword was spelled “afterward” in the doc. Otherwise, I don’t really have any big…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @theducktator @keilah-h @theshadow @anyone-else
Thank you everyone for your comments on the doc!!
The reason I haven’t added anything new is because I moved it all to Reedsy. Reedsy will professionally typeset it all, and have a more professional look to it, and I like Reedsy better for writing.
The point of…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, it hasn’t been working right for a few days now. But without Kathleen around to fix it, I’m not sure if it will get better. 😕
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
KP is breaking on my phone. I got emailed for that but when I clicked on it, it did not show your post. Now I’m on my laptop, and somehow it shows it now. 🤔
“What? What did I do?” *in very innocent voice.*
Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly kill…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
It just sounds so much better than “looked”. XD
@shadow @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @theducktator @savannah-grace2009 @sorry-if-i-forgot-anyone-😢
Next two chapters! 😆 I’m fairly pleased with these. Chapter 13 (Alec’s first POV!) may need to be extended a bit, but it certainly ups the stakes a bit. At…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Happy late birthday!!!!!!!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m shaking my head at you right now.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, sometimes it looks different and the entire website doesn’t load, but it still works usually.
You 100% are!!
Nice. 😎
I feel like I’ve had a tone of those scenes though.
Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.
You have no ide…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I got tagged for both of these, so I’m assuming it’s working again for the most part.
since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore,
I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.
Good section. I was right about them meeting the boy again, but wrong about him coming with them. Oh well.
When did Leon start calli…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
So, uh…. I’m really sorry, I started Fern but it’s getting a little scarier than I’d like and I don’t think I should continue. If you could maybe pick a different character, I’d still love to draw one for you… I just can’t continue with the spooky ookies for my conscience sake… sorry again… 🫥😓😶
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Probably not, I guess I just missed that.
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