Trailblazer

@grcr

I love that!! I love how you can see so much personality in each person! <33

@loopylin

So cuteee! Yesss, she needs to become a new character!!

@highscribeofaetherium

That looks soo good!!!

@ellette-giselle

Hey, he can’t hear me. 🤭

Okay, cool. Looking forward to the next section!

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha. Yeah, no problem. He did faint, so there obviously was enough blood lost for that. You’re good! So, does this mean you’ll have to rewrite a lot of what you already have, or not much since you’re about to have Joseph leave?

@ellette-giselle

Overall, it was pretty good. Some of the dialogue towards the end felt a tiny bit clunky, though.

Very well,”” Eric sighed. “I shall bare the displays of emotion for tonight, but by tomorrow hugs will be limited to once a month.”

This is funny, but it sounds old-fashioned all of a sudden. Is Eric just teasing? Does he lapse i…[Read more]

@rae @raxforge I was kind of shipping you guys in my head already, but I didn’t want to say anything in case it was completely wrong. That’s cute though. 🥲💕

@ellette-giselle

1. It gives the reader more hope in a happy ending.

2. It’s more interesting because you play on the past events of the book to make readers think Asher and Eric will die, but then defy the stereotype, keeping them on their toes.

3. It saves Asher and Eric. 🤗

@ellette-giselle

YES! Much better. Thanks so so much!

@stephie

Oh! That’s a relief! I wasn’t sure how to make my characters interact with a 2D dog!!!

@stephie

I also forgot to mention that he’s a cardboard cutout right now: dry, without a personality, but with some sort of 2D substance I’ve inserted into him which goes along the lines of “you were a bad person, now you’re trying to change, good luck.”

Wait, he’s 2D?? Or is that figuratively? Would you mind explaining?

But, yes! That will…[Read more]

@raxforge

There wasn’t really a story, Fantasy RP was set up to have a loose story. Animal RP is kinda of like the other RPs where there real isn’t a story but the RPers make the story up as they go along.

Okay, that sounds fine.

 I am a little busy now a days, so I won’t be very helpful in getting the story moved along, so it may be better if you…

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@esther-c

Sure thing!

@grcr

That’s totally fine! I think Duckator said the same thing.

By the way, if you do turn a character into an animal, you could make it so that they were always an animal, not turned into one. Either way, it’s up to you! I didn’t even think of having them know that they were once human! That’s a funny concept!

@whalekeeper

@ellette-giselle

@highscribeofaetherium

That’s totally fine! Thanks for letting me know.

@liberty

Ok! Thanks for the offer! 🤗

@trailblazer

HIIIIII!!!! Glad you’re back!! I was thinking about you the other day! Good to know you’re alive lol! 😁

@loopylin

Thank you so much!! 😊

@liberty

I may join this, we’ll see. I’m gonna be pretty busy for a while of days so I can’t really promise anything… but I may or may not jump in later! Thanks for the tag!

I’d have to transform a character into an animal, since I don’t think I have many animal characters… (oh and, not that this could/would apply here, but it’s really funny to…[Read more]

@theshadow

Everyone else had some fantastic points and I agree. God does everything with a purpose, and one of those purpose is to bring glory to His name. The angels were made to do God’s will and serve Him, right? Satan didn’t want to, yet time and time again we see Satan’s plans thwarted and God glorified. I like how Andrew put it:

God knew…

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@loopylin

👍

@mineralizedwritings

We haven’t started the RP yet, so there isn’t anything to read! I’m trying to get a good number of people with their characters before starting.

Um…Rax originally made this page, and he said no half-animals. I think we should stick to that. You could make a fully animal version of them, though. That would work.