Trailblazer

@liberty Hey, you’ve got to write the next scene! 😆

@hybridlore

WHAT!??? 4 balls? I’ve not even caught up on my 5 balls yet!!!!

*jumps around in snow*

*gets hit by snowball*

*falls into snow*

❄️ Yay! Another snowball! ❄️

@mineralizedwritings

Jara carried her pole over to where her brothers stood. Jara opened Cameron’s tackle box—retrieving a jar of worms from inside. As she weaved the worm onto her hook, she noticed a jar sitting in the grass beside the box. A lab…

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@liberty X4 💨❄

@ellette-giselle

Looks good!

@esther-c @rae @ellette-giselle

OMCCCC

I’m so sorryyyy I totally forgot about this!

Ahhh

Ruth, you can totally RP first!!

@ellette-giselle

I don’t think I ever really did that either . . . unless it was like, a cut on my finger. I’ve never really heard of people licking their knees 😶

@mineralizedwritings I love it!!

@ellette-giselle

15 snowballs!? GIRLLLLLLL😭😭

how dare you

also, Eli is there, he was just with Jonathan and the other boys. Riker didn’t really say hello to everyone in the first place, plus that’s not going to be the full scene (if it even makes it into the book). Don’t worry, all of Riker’s kids are…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Lol, the last part. 😆

I think the scene felt a little awkward just because we haven’t seen much of Amelia and what she feels about Joseph, but I think you’re working on adding in more of that. Otherwise, good job.

@freed_and_redeemed I love that scene!!

@whalekeeper @loopylin I mean sure, you can team up, as long as it doesn’t get out of hand. *hides behind a tree*

@rae

Eeeeek! I’ve got to catch up on my snowballs! I currently have 5!

@elishavet-pidyon

oh…..I’ve never been hit 2x yet…..yesssssssss…*evil chuckle* now I get to hit 4 people!!!!! You will most like be one of them.

@elishavet-pidyon

oh…..I’ve never been hit 2x yet…..yesssssssss…*evil chuckle* now I get to hit 4 people!!!!! You will most like be one of them.

@ellette-giselle @liberty @hybridlore

Here’s your 700 (actually a little over) for the 14 snowballs y’all threw at me.

ridiculous amount of snowballs

Y’all gotta chill XD

Mostly you, Ellette😤

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Riker nudged the front door open, walking into the small foyer. He stepped aside to give Leon room to get inside and glanced around the…

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I vote B!!

C was really tempting though… lol

@freed_and_redeemed

Awww 😢😢

@ellette-giselle

Aw, cute scene between Joseph and Julian! I noticed a few typos, but that’s not a big deal. Only other thing is, I noticed that in Sabina’s letter someone said that the orphans need Jesus. I don’t know why, I can’t remember too many references to Him, so that stood out to me since many fantasy books use a different name for Jes…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Josef laughed and the next moment Rosemarie was in his arms, laughing and trying to kiss him. “Josef, you horrible rascal! You scared me half to death!”

“Papa!” Ernst shouted, leaping off the table and running to him. Josef caught his son with his free arm and hugged him. “Hello little man!”

Aww…it’s so sweet! I hope Marta…[Read more]