@trailblazer
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Ahhhh @savannah_grace2009 Mistyped your tag above
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@jonas @rae @savannah-grace2009 @anyone-else
Kari
Left alone in the room with Kate, Nora, and Amir, Kari tried to think of something to say to break the awkward silence. Amir looked grumpy, but Kari couldn’t blame him. He was the only guy, and he was assigned to help with scouting missions. What could be more boring?
Actually, Kari didn’t think…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I’m not in the Dark Castle RP, so I’d prefer if we don’t mix them, but as far as bringing villains into this RP I don’t really care.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Some more….
Towards the end of the summer, on a Sunday afternoon, the Cullivers invited my family and the Perkins over for a picnic. George, Etta, Chester, and I went out to the barn. The horses seemed skittish, which I thought rather odd, but I didn’t see anything that would spook them.
“What’s the matte…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Yes, I introduced him more recently. He’s been part of the story but I felt like he wasn’t super well developed so I’ve been trying to write more with him in this part of the plot to help develop him some more. And if I say anything else I’m afraid I’ll give spoilers so I’m gonna shut up now lol.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
What’s your vote? Chester and Libbie, or Albert and Libbie? I’m not gonna give any spoilers, but I’m curious to hear your thoughts.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I’m back y’all! I started reading through some of it while I ate breakfast this morning but didn’t have a chance to get fully caught up until now. If any of you asked me a question that I don’t answer here, just remind me. I think I devoured about ten pages total between breakfast and right now lol.
I think it’s a good thing that Kari’s…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Also, heads up y’all, I’m able to be on here for about an hour, and then after that I won’t be on until tomorrow afternoon. I might have a brief chance to get caught up tomorrow morning, but most likely you won’t hear much from me until tomorrow afternoon.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
She doesn’t have any pets or anything, but I think because of her personality she could naturally be good at taking care of animals if someone shows her the basics of feeding them, etc.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
This might also be a good place for all the characters who aren’t in the RP anymore to go home… if we pretend they were still here until this moment and then Prince Fennin sends them home.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Kari
Kari watched as Ellis, Nahim, and Nora stood up and declared their willingness to fight. Mixed feelings stirred up within her. On the one hand, she wanted to go home, and she knew she had no experience in fighting dragons, aside from what she’d read in books, and that wasn’t helpful if she didn’t have the physical…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I’m trying to remember where that was exactly. Was that when they went after Ottoline after she shot at the queen?
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Some more… Honestly I’m not sure what the point of this scene is supposed to be, entirely, but here it is anyway lol.
Etta was still absent the next day, and after school, I met George and Chester by the road going further into town.
“You all still want to stop by the post?” Chester asked.
“Of cours…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 1 year ago
I don’t have much experience with Wix, although from the few blogs I’ve seen on there, it looks like a good platform. I have WordPress, and yes, the free version does have ads. However, as the author of the blog, I don’t see any of the ads, and when I’m looking at my blog from another device (not logged into my account) I haven’t seen…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@jonas I think it might depend on the location of each of the areas. For some of them, it might make more sense just to go straight to the next one without going back, but others (like you mentioned, the ocean) would make sense to come back first. Any artists on here want to draw a map?
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year ago
If someone ever looks at my browser history…
“WHY were you looking at shoulder fractures and gunshot wounds?!?!”
Seriously though… sometimes I laugh at the things I have to look up when I’m writing lol.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@jonas @rae @highscribeofaetherium
I think the groups look good… Kari gets along with most people so finding a particularly conflicting partner for her would be hard. Plus my schedule’s busier so it’s probably better if she has a role that’s not super important at the moment. I might have a chance to pop on here tomorrow morning before I leave…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Yeah I don’t think many of the guys would find it interesting lol. Plus Kari’s soon gonna be worn out from all the excitement and ready to go to bed anyway.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Kari
This “pillow fight” was getting out of hand. Kari had never seen someone chop a pillow in half in the middle of a pillow fight before, but it had happened twice already. Kari tucked her pillow under her arm and dove back into the hallway after Ottoline, whom Kate had pushed out of the way.
“Are you okay, Ottoline?” Kari asked, landing on…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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