Trahia the Minstrel

@ellette-giselle I don’t know. Either way could work.

Oh, never mind, you found the typo.

Other than that, the cover looks beautiful.

Also, I have a few suggestions for the back blurb.

• You accidentally wrote “These children are forbidden to form any emotional that might hinder their unwavering loyalty.” Should it be “emotional bond” instead?
• “Jonathan, the second-born” should maybe be something like “Jonathan, a second-born.” But that one can stay in if you really want…

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@ellette-giselle That looks really good!!

I’m assuming the number changes for each sector.

It reminds me a little bit of the insignias my brother designs for his Icebreaker Empire universe. (He hopes to someday make a video game with a tie-in book series.)

@ellette-giselle yay!

@ellette-giselle I know right? It’s hilarious!

@ellette-giselle I love those lolllll

why are those so much like the things my characters would say (the first one is such a Blue and Rinzler kind of conversation to have lolllll)

@whalekeeper Lol

Glad you’re feeling good afterward!

@grcr I’m good with that!

@ellette-giselle you’re welcome!

@grcr I just found this forum, and while I’m gonna wait to put in a character until you’re done with Ellette’s (I bet it’s gonna look great, I can’t wait to see it), will you be able to do one of mine?

@rae

Lol. I’d be very curious to see my dear Hobbes as a Changeling-Ailurid cross. I think that’d be super cute!

I’m going to draw that sometime, it’d be cool.

Or I’ll make him in Heroforge and show a picture to you.

Probably both.

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I think they were all really good.

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

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@ellette-giselle Sure did!!

@ellette-giselle ugh I hate it when that happens.

@rae wow, those look amazing!!!

The stripes and slitted eye on the cat cowboy are making me think “oh, a Changeling” lol

(even though he’d most likely be an Ailurid cause y’know, cat. Although being a hybrid isn’t out of the question.)

And the envelope is so cool!! I actually like the dragon.

@hybridlore ikr? It is honestly so sad.

@ellette-giselle

ooo! This is good!! I like this! I know for sure who it is, and to several of them that actually happens. (Though not an orange rock. 😝)

HAHA I knew you were gonna say this.

Yours are also really good scenarios, I can totally see them happening.

@hybridlore I can’t wait to read it!

I’m ordering three more helpings from each of you with a side of french fries and a milkshake. And make it quick.

Luckily for you, I should have two characters done by today.

@elishavet-pidyon thank you!! The sandpiper was one of my favorites too.

@whalekeeper lol

it’s 10 am where I’m at and you’re making me want a milkshake…..