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BlueJay changed their profile picture 10 years, 3 months ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic Female Protagonists in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
@kate-flournoy. I find I ask myself (when I’m writing about girls) “what would I do in this situation?” Anna (Anna’s Savanna) and Tess (Princess Tess and the Perfect Story) are based on my views and opinions, and yet I still don’t feel like they are me. I don’t make them me, I just give them a few good ideas and then let them handle the rest.…[Read more]
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BlueJay changed their profile picture 10 years, 3 months ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
I love your story @writefury I can very easily picture the little boy and his smile. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Published (well, self-published, but still…) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
Well done @hope. It looks great. 😀 😀 😀 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
Since there are two writing prompts I decided to combine them. Here goes:
Once there was on opossum and his name was Sparky. Now Sparky was like any other opossum, he had long silvery fur and climbed trees very well. The only trouble was…well…he was afraid of the dark. Now if you’re an opossum, that can pose as a rather big problem.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Princess Tess and the Perfect Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
@jadamae No, unfortunately I’m not a princess. I think she based on my feelings but really she’s not very much like me.
@writefury. Thank you. Yes, it was a KP critique awhile ago.
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
I paused and crouched beside the remains of an old building. The loose rocks crumbled as my shoulder brushed them. I ground my teeth in frustration. This job needed absolute silence. The rain made things hard to see, but I knew that any further and I’d go over the edge of the cliff.
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BlueJay started the topic Princess Tess and the Perfect Story in the forum 10 years, 3 months ago
@jadamae I saw in the comments to my story, Princess Tess and the Perfect Story, that you’d love to read the rest. Well, here you go. Enjoy!
Once upon a time, there lived a beautiful princess. Which is how all good princess stories should start. She was as gentle as a lamb, as graceful as a dove and as rich as, well, as rich as could be. She…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Talking to Myself in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
Oh yes… *blushes embarrassedly* I talk to myself (well, not really myself) all the time. I also find I talk to my toy dog, who I have had for 16 years. He is very good at listening, always patient, never condemns me, or laughs at me, (like some people.) *glances around shiftily* And he does give some really good answers when he’s a mind too.…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Poetry Critique PLEASE! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 3 months ago
Great poem @belegteleri. And my mum would love you. She’s always trying to teach us the difference between to and too; your and you’re; its and it’s and so on. (I’m at least getting better. :))
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BlueJay replied to the topic Character Introduction Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 3 months ago
Silly phone and auto correct. Try again.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
Grrr….I’m trying to do this via phone cause our Internet on our computers is down. Not easy.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
Can someone tell me how the makes quotes look like quotes. Mine just look like I’ve rewritten them.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
A book where nobody dies.
Now that would be freaky.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
A prince who is selfish (and decides to leave the princess in the tower
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BlueJay replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
*good. Not go
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BlueJay replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
So true @anna-brie. So true. I don’t know how many times I’ve written something that I think is so go only to have my mum or sister tell me is so uninteresting or not needed.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
A maiden in a tower as the villain.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
A handsome young villain with evil butterflies wielding time sabers ready to rule the world.
Hmmmm…this is getting interesting! 😀 - Load More
