TheShadow

@theshadow

Does this take place in the real world, or in a fictional world?

Oh, a fictional world. I thought that was clear with the country names. It’s a fictional world, but the story could have taken place in the real world. (i.e. not fantasy or something like that)

Aaron is 18. Did I not say that? I did in the first draft. whoops.

@theshadow

Oh that is totally fine. Me being an author, I starting wondering if something had happened to you, and I was hoping that you were ok. lol. I need to quit thinking the worst! haha! Just wait until time allows. Hope you had a fun time at the Lake!

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelseiforgot

Ok, so for anyone who read the first chapter. Jonathan’s brother has been taken away to Academy (as was shown) and this is a day or so later. not much happened in that time that would…[Read more]

@theshadow

Hello, I haven’t heard from you in a little while! Just wanted to make sure this got to you!

@keilah-h @theducktator @theshadow @rae

When you plan to RP and then get slapped by life….

😭So sorry guys

I’ll be gone for the next two weeks, but I’ll try to do a quick one

Mind if I throw in an animal chase or something?

EVERI

The man named Sniper led them towards the forest, leaving half the group behind. Everi far preferred this op…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theshadow

Silvanis

“Fairy doesn’t, but I can teach her.” Color rushed to Silvanis’s face as he realized how quickly he had said that. He looked away as he saw her eyes on him.

Sorry that’s it’s so short, not sure exactly what else to write.

@theshadow nahh it’s fine!! We needed some activity round here lol

Sniper

Trevor turned to me. “We’re ready, lead the way!”

I nodded and led the team out into the forest. “Since most of ya didn’t look like you wanted to go lookin’ for beetle grubs, we’ll be huntin’ mammal prey. Do all of ya know ‘ow to do that?” I took my knife and hacked at…[Read more]

@esther-c @theducktator @folith-feolin @grcr @theshadow

I’ve tried several times to post and Wyoh keeps eating it, so I’m keeping this short and sweet because I have no effort left: Time to vote. Here is the link.

https://forms.gle/jaN4SiPRb8P3N2yN6

Happy summer vacation!

@theshadow

Also, this map might help you to visualize the countries.

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @idk

Hi. This is a scene from Guardians Angels. Criticism is requested and welcome.

Nahims sword sang as it sailed towards his opponent. The opponent blocked, swinging its second sword towards Nahim…

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@savannah_grace2009

Awesome!! I’ll tag a few more of you too.

@stephie @theshadow @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed

OK all, how is this for a story starter? I want to honestly know if it catches y’all attention.

 
Prologue
7/10/2065
 

Night had fallen over the capital…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

@theshadow

 
ALTERNATE ENDING!!!
Julius lowered his head, but beyond the taunts of the voice, he could feel something. It was like the warmth of the sun’s first rays creeping into the courtyard. It was a tiny, tiny sliver of peace. Julius found himself looking back at Marcus and Flavia. I was there for them. A voice w…[Read more]

@theshadow

I do like the ambiguity of the ending, I just wanted to make sure Julius chose right lol.

well, now that there’s two of you saying it and not just one, I feel more inclined to go to go dig up the alternate ending from it’s hiding spot. lol.

It is good thing, it shows that your book has an impact on the reader.

Yay!!! I’m so glad!!

Your…

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@theshadow I’ll be here. LOL.

@esther-c @theducktator @folith-feolin @grcr @theshadow

This is a final call to anyone who would like to make suggestions. Tomorrow we’re going to move on to voting, if I can get to it tonight or tomorrow morning. Otherwise we’ll have to wait another day, because I’m kind of bogged up with summer school. Thanks! 🙂

@theshadow

THATS THE ENDING?! Nononono it can’t be the ending right?! Julius chose to die right?!

Well……. I had a crazy idea to leave it like that with no one ever knowing. However….. I can add one sentence that will change the entire ending and then you would know the answer to that. However, I also liked the unknown ending as well. what i…[Read more]

@theshadow

So that is the end. I await your reply……….. and possible outrage. lol. However, I have to kick off to do some stuff, so I’ll prob. get back tomorrow morning.

@theshadow

Chapter 16

Julius closed his eyes tightly. How did they do that? How could they face death so unafraid?

Ignatius voice broke in through his thoughts. “They walked out there was taking a twilight stroll. I must admit, the courage of these Christians is impressive.”

Julius felt sick. He could still hear the lion roaring out the…[Read more]

@theshadow

Thank you! I’m glad it was good. I’m also glad it hit hard, because I wanted it to, ya know. Chapter 16 is almost done.