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Esther replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 11 months ago
@whalekeeper @koshka @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @trailblazer @theducktator @grcr @theshadow
Y’all are so so so helpful!!! I wish I could reply to each individual response, but that would take a while. 🤪
The theme I’m getting from most of the responses though is that MG needs more wholesomeness, or at least that was what you enjoyed the mos…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@theducktator @whalekeeper @esther-c @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @grcr
I wrote some new chapters!
They’re really, REALLY rough but hopefully you guys enjoy them
(It gives me motivation to be able to share what I wrote with people, so thank you for supporting me 😊💜)
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Esther started the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 11 months, 1 week ago
Hey guys!!
So as I step away from one project for a while to let it simmer before I tackle the third draft, I need another longer length project to work on. I thought about starting on an idea that’s been rolling around in my head for a couple months, but I’ll need to do a lot of research and don’t feel like doing that yet, lol.
So! I’ve been wa…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
I am so so so sorry for not getting back to you sooner!! this got buried under a bunch of other things I had to take care of. But I’m back!
So far, for the first one I want it to be set in the summer or fall, and be about two high schoolers sending paper airplanes to each other from really far away and the two’s relationship and how…
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
@theshadow @grcr @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @keilah-h (Is this something you would be interested in? I can’t remember if you responded.) @stephie @trailblazer @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @i’m-sure-i-forgot-someone-so-consider-yourself-tagged-sorry!
I’m thinking about plann…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka @theshadow @whalekeeper
New chapter! Just one this week. The next two are important and they fit together, so those should be out next Tuesday, God willing.
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
THIS is why I’m not dating until college. 😂 I think I’d be allowed before then…but the sibling awkwardness is too much.
For real thoughhh 😂 I know in some family’s it’s not awkward, but I decided to go for it with Hallie’s family. XD
*squealing* I can forgive him for not taking her. He has a good reason.
🤭
*tries that* Can you rea…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Okay, sounds fine, but you might want to check out Ellette’s profile first. She just put some warning there about using Google.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow @keilah-h @theducktator
New chapter on the doc. 😉
Also, TCoH reached 50k on Saturday!! 🥳
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Hm, tags seem to be working kind of weird. Our names are not in blue, but I still got an email. 🤔
Absolutely! That seems like it would work great. Let me know when you send out the link!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago

I got my eye on ya, mate.look what you’ve done you’ve encouraged my obsession lollllllll -
Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin @power @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle @trailblazer @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @keilah-h @theshadow
Now is time for our next random question, served with a side of rainbow cupcakes! (Ugh, I can’t say anything rainbow-y without sounding weird. Oh well.)
So I had Chatgpt come up with the most random question…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
“Maybe this corner is a dead end.” Jack remarked, turning round. He started, taking a double look. “Uh, the path behind us is gone.”
Hard to follow the rule of staying on the path when the path itself won’t cooperate.
Olivia turned round, and, with the force of a wave on a stormy day, slapped Adaline.
Nice!
“How do you intend on gettin…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@theshadow I can’t help but snicker now every time I read that you’ve replied to something I’ve said, cause that implies you’ve read it 😂
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Great!
Also… don’t hurt Everett please!!
Lol. Three of them want me to make him suffer 🤨 My plan hasn’t changed, though. There are challenges ahead, but more for Sara and Cole. And Alec.
*smiles and nods* yes, put those characters through the fire, and we’ll see on the other side who were the true ones, and who wer…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @theshadow @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka
Two new chapters this week! They should be uploaded to the doc now. Excited to hear what y’all think!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
It looks good! I don’t have any major critiques. It is a very short chapter, but it does a good job of building on the tension. Also, I like the way you described the trees.
It seems a little weird that Olivia and Adeline and Dylan don’t seem to care about their families… well, maybe Dylan a little bit.
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