TheShadow

@theshadow

I really hate to do this again, but “wondered” was used twice again when Marcus was speaking to Ignatius.

No way!! I did not do that twice in a row! So sorry! haha! I normally catch that when I read back through it. thanks for pointing it out.

Oh, I’m glad the thing about Ignatius makes sense! No worries about not remembering!

@theshadow

I’m glad I’m not the only one who struggles with first chapters.

Oh dear, yeah, I had better use some body language. thanks for catching that. I’ll go back and hit some of those scenes!!!

Your right, if Ignatius was a normal guard. but, Ignatius is a Prætorian. As I mentioned in the first chapter, they are the elite soldiers, and in…[Read more]

@theshadow

Haha, no, I cannot stand repeated words! It’s like nails on the chalkboard!

Alrighty then, I’ll swap that scene around.

How is the second chapter? Better then the first? I always find my first chapter the roughest.

Hello! I think it’s really cool you guys have a book club going on and was wondering if I could participate in the next book discussion (whatever it is).

@theshadow That would be wonderful! So basically we’re going to have about a week to suggest books we’d like the group to read; there’s the link below you can click on to do that. Then, once w…[Read more]

Okay…

@keilah-h @grcr @loopylin @theshadow @linus-smallprint @idk

I’m going to do Tenz, my innocent little warrior who thinks water is only for drinking.

Tenz in his normal form

He is tall, towering over me at a little more than six feet, with a slim athletic build. An almost perfect balance of power and speed. Despite this, I can only ever…

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@theshadow

Thanks!! 😄💛

@theshadow thanks!!

@keilah-h, @grcr, @theshadow, and @loopylin

Thank you again all for entering, this was a lot of fun! I look forward to the next challenge! Speaking of which, @rae, you can post a description of one of your characters when you are ready!

@keilah-h, @grcr, @theshadow, and @loopylin

Keilah: When I first saw your drawing, I would get after you made the wrong eye blind. However, I realized that I said the left eye was blind in the description when I meant to say the right. It would be unfair to judge you based on that then. You are the only one who remembered the extra sleeves for…[Read more]

@keilah-h, @grcr, @theshadow, and @loopylin (since this is just for fun and I appreciate having a 4th entry, I will include your drawing in judging as well)

Thank you all for your submissions! I am currently judging them and will announce the winner soon. A reminder, I am judging based on accuracy, not on drawing skills. I will give each of you…[Read more]

@stephie, @grcr, @highscribeofaetherium, @loopylin, @theshadow, @theducktator, @keilah-h and @ava-blue

Last day to submit a drawing of Charles!

I will decide tomorrow who won and reveal my drawing, then the floor will be yours @rae.

@keilah-h @theducktator @theshadow @princesachronicle22

Silvanis

“I’m going with weird hat guy,” Silvanis volunteered. “Callum, you coming?”

“I think I’ll stay here, Dad.”

Silvanis shrugged. “Suit yourself.”

“I’m coming with you,” Fairy announced.

Silvanis’s pupils widened a little but he made no comment.

@theshadow lol yeah

@theducktator @rae good ideas!!

@princesachronicle22

Huntress/Sniper

“I am in favor of splitting up. Two or three groups should work.” said the male talking duck–Bob, from what I remembered.

“I don’t have a weapon.” Joy pointed out.

“Most of us do, so you’re pretty protected whoever you go with.” I assured her. “No…[Read more]

@rae @princesachronicle22 @theshadow @keilah-h

Joy

“I may be insane, but I’m not eat grubs insane,” said Joy. “That would be even more repulsive than peanut butter and cheese.” She shuddered. That had been one of the worst experiences of her life, but at least she’d gotten five dollars.

“I’d eat grubs!” said Stephen cheerily. “Sounds…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yes! The awkwardness of finding out this is a couples thing would be hilarious.

@theshadow @princesachronicle22 @rae

Should we have like a big cabin somewhere with food? And maybe games?

@theshadow for some reason I’m happy that Trevor recognizes Sniper’s unusual expressions. Maybe I’ll put them in the same group, try and get my stubborn “adopted” character to make a friend lol

@rae @princesachronicle22 @theducktator

Huntress/Sniper

“I say we should split into groups and fan out. That way we can cover more ground and…[Read more]

@stephie, @grcr, @highscribeofaetherium, @loopylin, @theshadow, @theducktator, and @ava-blue

Just a friendly reminder. There are 5 days left to submit a drawing of Charles.

you know what? I’m gonna go for it cause I don’t really want another dead RP on my hands lol

@princesachronicle22 @rae @theshadow @theducktator

Huntress/Sniper

“If we have the ingredients, I can make pumpkin spice lattes. I work at a coffee shop. Does anyone know if there is any food at all in this place?” Joy asked.

I wanted to know more…[Read more]

Tagging more people! @linus-smallprint @theshadow @jonas @lydibug @savannah_grace900 @highscribeofaetherium @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @esther-c @smiley @princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12 @anyone