TheShadow

@savannah_grace2009

@theshadow

 
ALTERNATE ENDING!!!
Julius lowered his head, but beyond the taunts of the voice, he could feel something. It was like the warmth of the sun’s first rays creeping into the courtyard. It was a tiny, tiny sliver of peace. Julius found himself looking back at Marcus and Flavia. I was there for them. A voice w…[Read more]

@theshadow

I do like the ambiguity of the ending, I just wanted to make sure Julius chose right lol.

well, now that there’s two of you saying it and not just one, I feel more inclined to go to go dig up the alternate ending from it’s hiding spot. lol.

It is good thing, it shows that your book has an impact on the reader.

Yay!!! I’m so glad!!

Your…

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@theshadow I’ll be here. LOL.

@esther-c @theducktator @folith-feolin @grcr @theshadow

This is a final call to anyone who would like to make suggestions. Tomorrow we’re going to move on to voting, if I can get to it tonight or tomorrow morning. Otherwise we’ll have to wait another day, because I’m kind of bogged up with summer school. Thanks! 🙂

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THATS THE ENDING?! Nononono it can’t be the ending right?! Julius chose to die right?!

Well……. I had a crazy idea to leave it like that with no one ever knowing. However….. I can add one sentence that will change the entire ending and then you would know the answer to that. However, I also liked the unknown ending as well. what i…[Read more]

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So that is the end. I await your reply……….. and possible outrage. lol. However, I have to kick off to do some stuff, so I’ll prob. get back tomorrow morning.

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Chapter 16

Julius closed his eyes tightly. How did they do that? How could they face death so unafraid?

Ignatius voice broke in through his thoughts. “They walked out there was taking a twilight stroll. I must admit, the courage of these Christians is impressive.”

Julius felt sick. He could still hear the lion roaring out the…[Read more]

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Thank you! I’m glad it was good. I’m also glad it hit hard, because I wanted it to, ya know. Chapter 16 is almost done.

@theshadow Here you go!

 
Chapter 15
The cheers and stamping of the crowd sounded like thunder above them. Flavia flinched at the sound and clung to Marcus’ hand. Marcus swallowed hard and looked up at the roof above them. He knew the people were waiting up there, feeding their lust for blood and violence on the gladiator fights. From somewhere n…[Read more]

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Sigh, it’s another game of will-he-won’t-he

I know. I just love those. *sighs happily*

I have to brush my sister’s hair, and then I should just about have this next chapter ready for you!

@theshadow

You’re so welcome!! I’m glad you liked it!!

OK, @highscribeofaetherium, do you have one yet?

@theshadow

I’m glad you like it!!

Do you think Julius is going to believe?

Oh, whoops. I’ll switch that. Thanks for catching it!

Also, did you see your picture of Eldred?

@theshadow

Ok. Here is Eldred. I hope you like him!!

I did him in black and white because I realized I didn’t know the color of his surcoat, and since he is a knight that would be important. If you would like a version in color as well then I can do it if you let me know what color the surcoat is. If you like it black and white then that’s great…[Read more]

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And here you go! Enjoy!!!

 
Chapter 14
Julius clenched his teeth to stop them from chattering. He shifted uneasily and leaned back against the wall. Ignatius betrayed me. He tricked me, and now he’s angry with me. It isn’t fair. I haven’t done anything wrong. I was only trying to do what was right, and now I’m locked up like a crimina…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I am so sorry…I just can’t keep up with the ammount of chapters you write

Haha, that’s ok! Thank you for the help you have been giving! It’s been awesome!

I was concerned that you might not have enough plot for a full novel,

I wanted it to be a novella, I just wasn’t sure if I could fully develop the plot in a novella, but it…[Read more]

@theshadow and here you are! I’ll stop in a minute to draw your lovely character. 😀

 
Chapter 13
Julius’ leaned his head wearily against the wall. His eyes felt like they had sand in them, and he was weary beyond imagining. Yet, he couldn’t bring himself to close his eyes and sleep. The nightmares were worse then the waking fear.

Marcus was asl…[Read more]

@theshadow thanks! I’m glad you were willing to listen to my randomness

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Here’s the next one. I wonder what happened to Sara. She had said she had some thoughts, but it looks like she vanished. lol. Let me know what you think!

 
Chapter 12
“Ignatius, what’s going on?” demanded Julius.

“I’m doing what I came to do all along. It took me a while to wonder about without your guidance, but I managed. It seems…[Read more]

@theshadow here you go! Sorry it took a sec!

 
Chapter 11
Julius stood staring out of his window. It was not fully dark yet, and he was having a hard time waiting. After almost two months, he would finally come face to face with Marcus again. It seemed like they had been separated by a lifetime. Julius didn’t know what to expect. Love for his f…[Read more]

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That’s right where I want you. XD

Keep an eye out, I’m about to post the next chapter.