TheShadow

@keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @rae @thearcaneaxiom @freed_and_redeemed @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @grcr

hello, for anyone who’s been reading the scenes I’ve been posting, here’s another Jonathan/Jim interaction. Jonathan is now 15, making Jim 27.

It was late one evening. Jonathan sat on his mattress and watched Jim, who was shaving with…

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@princesachronicle22 @rae @theshadow

Sniper

Somethin’ snapped a twig behind us. At first I thought it was a member of the group, but Everi’s “Did anyone else hear that?” told me that supposition was false.

“Everyone, freeze. We have a creature towards the back to the left,” Silvanis, the bloke with the freaky arm, told us.

“So, what’s th…[Read more]

@theshadow

I have an idea for a book, but I’m not sure if it’s too dark to write about. It was essentially going to be dystopian and where atomic bombs destroyed the major cities of the world, but looking back on it I realized how dark that actually is.

The main message was going to be that no matter how dark the times are, there is always hop…

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@theshadow

Just reading over this now. I pretty much agree with what everyone else has said. In the words of Andrew Peterson, “Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to show how beautiful is the prick of light.” Writing something dark is not bad if we use it to glorify God. If you still feel uncomfortable writing about…[Read more]

Taking some more people who have expressed interest in my story.

@highscribeofaetherium, @grcr, @keilah-h, @theducktator, @theshadow, @stephie, @theloonyone, and @thearcaneaxiom

Again, don’t feel pressure to follow this if you don’t want to/are too busy.

@theshadow

Silvanis

“Trevor’s right. There’s nothing better than getting into a fight.”

Fairy elbowed him in the side but Silvanis didn’t even wince.

@theshadow

Here is the next section.

“Aaron! Aaron, wait up!”

Aaron turned and saw his friend running down the road to catch up with him. “Hello Peter.”

“Aaron, what on earth is going on?” demanded Peter.

“What do you mean?” asked Aaron, leaning against the fence that ran next to the road.

“You,” exclaimed Peter. “You’ve been acting…[Read more]

@theshadow

Does this take place in the real world, or in a fictional world?

Oh, a fictional world. I thought that was clear with the country names. It’s a fictional world, but the story could have taken place in the real world. (i.e. not fantasy or something like that)

Aaron is 18. Did I not say that? I did in the first draft. whoops.

@theshadow

Oh that is totally fine. Me being an author, I starting wondering if something had happened to you, and I was hoping that you were ok. lol. I need to quit thinking the worst! haha! Just wait until time allows. Hope you had a fun time at the Lake!

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelseiforgot

Ok, so for anyone who read the first chapter. Jonathan’s brother has been taken away to Academy (as was shown) and this is a day or so later. not much happened in that time that would…[Read more]

@theshadow

Hello, I haven’t heard from you in a little while! Just wanted to make sure this got to you!

@keilah-h @theducktator @theshadow @rae

When you plan to RP and then get slapped by life….

😭So sorry guys

I’ll be gone for the next two weeks, but I’ll try to do a quick one

Mind if I throw in an animal chase or something?

EVERI

The man named Sniper led them towards the forest, leaving half the group behind. Everi far preferred this op…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theshadow

Silvanis

“Fairy doesn’t, but I can teach her.” Color rushed to Silvanis’s face as he realized how quickly he had said that. He looked away as he saw her eyes on him.

Sorry that’s it’s so short, not sure exactly what else to write.

@theshadow nahh it’s fine!! We needed some activity round here lol

Sniper

Trevor turned to me. “We’re ready, lead the way!”

I nodded and led the team out into the forest. “Since most of ya didn’t look like you wanted to go lookin’ for beetle grubs, we’ll be huntin’ mammal prey. Do all of ya know ‘ow to do that?” I took my knife and hacked at…[Read more]

@esther-c @theducktator @folith-feolin @grcr @theshadow

I’ve tried several times to post and Wyoh keeps eating it, so I’m keeping this short and sweet because I have no effort left: Time to vote. Here is the link.

https://forms.gle/jaN4SiPRb8P3N2yN6

Happy summer vacation!

@theshadow

Also, this map might help you to visualize the countries.

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @idk

Hi. This is a scene from Guardians Angels. Criticism is requested and welcome.

Nahims sword sang as it sailed towards his opponent. The opponent blocked, swinging its second sword towards Nahim…

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@savannah_grace2009

Awesome!! I’ll tag a few more of you too.

@stephie @theshadow @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed

OK all, how is this for a story starter? I want to honestly know if it catches y’all attention.

 
Prologue
7/10/2065
 

Night had fallen over the capital…[Read more]