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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow
Ok, here is Turin. I am seriously cringing right now. Ugh. I HAVE to redo him.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow
Anyone, (specifically Sara because this is her favorite.) Want to see a drawing of Sabina?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@theshadow ok so actually I was reading over my writing again and I realized that while you were off in saying Engineer’s line was from when their team lost and he wanted to know why, there actually is a scene very close to that in the story! He’s trying to boost morale for his team after they get beaten soundly, although Huntress is the only one…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months, 3 weeks ago
K y’all, here’s the next part. @linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009 @theshadow
As Aaron stood and spoke to the people, he knew this time something was different. He could feel the Lord working among them, and he could see in their expressions that their eyes were being opened.
By noon, several villagers had come to faith, and once it started, it…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009, @keilah-h, @theshadow, @stephie, @loopylin
I will be working on Chapter the 8th this week. In the mean time, here are some more fun facts about a couple more characters.
Alan Wherl
Age: 22
Race: Wizard (though still mostly human)
Dominate Hand: Left
Favourite Ice Cream: Chocolate
Occupation: Solider
Trivia:
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@theshadow You were close
- You got Spy’s perfectly correct. I’m actually astonished.
- Heavy’s was correct too, but I suppose if you know the characters, it’s kinda easy.
- Soldier’s is also very close in the “being delusional” part.
- Scout was definitely showing off, but he wasn’t killing anyone quite yet. It was when they’d first got hired,…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 3 weeks ago
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Thanks for reading it!!!!!!! <3
Idk if I’d call it a resistance, but all I can say is that light always prevails over darkness!!!!!!!!!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009, @keilah-h, @stephie, @loopylin, @theshadow
I have been working on developing Rour’s character. I’m not going to give you everything from it (unless you really want to, this is one file that will not spoil the upcoming story), but here is some fun trivia about the character:
Trivia:
- As a child, Rour did not like stories whe…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Wholesome Exclamations in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Yes, Tintin is amazing!!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@kyronthearcanin ok!
Sniper
I didn’t think much of it ’till it was gone.
Two pairs of eyes, watchin’ us for a split second before they dove back into the bush.
Gray fur, and two sets of ears.
Wolves.
Now we don’t ‘ave wolves where I come from, but we’ve got dingoes and thylacines, and they’re basically the same thing.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@theducktator thanks
@theshadow now I kinda want to know what you think the context for each one is
you can just do the ten mercs if you’d like
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Wholesome Exclamations in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 3 weeks ago
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whaley replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 3 weeks ago
…I guess nobody saw my post :- Maybe tags will help!
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @livingwoodchronicles @esther-c @rae @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @elishavete-pidyon @theducktator @ellette-giselle @theshadow @linus-smallprint @godlyfantasy12
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 3 weeks ago
*me RPing because I’m bored and my charries are loners for now XD*
@theducktator @theshadow @keilah-h @princesachronicle22 @rae
Naria
Whoever dragged us out here is going to meet the sharp end of my sword, up close and personal.
I run my tongue over my sharp teeth and try not to snarl. Sorren’s paw is warm in mine, so I try to focus on that. I…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Wholesome Exclamations in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle and @theshadow
All right, thank your for your feedback!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months, 3 weeks ago
here is the next section!
The sun was rising early the next morning, warming the earth and casting light over the scene in the square. Turin was sitting on the ground asleep, his head leaning against the overturned wagon. Others were asleep in the square, but many more where still awake, listening to, and asking questions, of Aaron.…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Wholesome Exclamations in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@mineralizedwritings, @ellette-giselle, @savannah_grace2009, @theshadow
Thank you for your help. I think this gives me some ideas. Not all of these seem to fit my character, so I may try to lean into sarcasm as I feel that this fits better. “Great. Just Great.” However, I think you have given me some ideas for some other characters as well. Words…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@theshadow lol ha
I just realized you’re the only one I’ve met so far that would actually get the reason behind most of those.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months, 3 weeks ago
I have a lot of friends who like Turin best. Aaron will always be my dear boy though. I poured so much into him, that I will forever love him the most.
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