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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Hello, I haven’t heard from you in a little while! Just wanted to make sure this got to you!
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@keilah-h @theducktator @theshadow @rae
When you plan to RP and then get slapped by life….
😭So sorry guys
I’ll be gone for the next two weeks, but I’ll try to do a quick one
Mind if I throw in an animal chase or something?
EVERI
The man named Sniper led them towards the forest, leaving half the group behind. Everi far preferred this op…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Silvanis
“Fairy doesn’t, but I can teach her.” Color rushed to Silvanis’s face as he realized how quickly he had said that. He looked away as he saw her eyes on him.
Sorry that’s it’s so short, not sure exactly what else to write.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@theshadow nahh it’s fine!! We needed some activity round here lol
Sniper
Trevor turned to me. “We’re ready, lead the way!”
I nodded and led the team out into the forest. “Since most of ya didn’t look like you wanted to go lookin’ for beetle grubs, we’ll be huntin’ mammal prey. Do all of ya know ‘ow to do that?” I took my knife and hacked at…[Read more]
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Stephie replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@esther-c @theducktator @folith-feolin @grcr @theshadow
I’ve tried several times to post and Wyoh keeps eating it, so I’m keeping this short and sweet because I have no effort left: Time to vote. Here is the link.
https://forms.gle/jaN4SiPRb8P3N2yN6
Happy summer vacation!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Also, this map might help you to visualize the countries.
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Ellette Giselle started the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 months, 3 weeks ago
This is the first section. Can’t wait for your thoughts!!!
Let There Be Light
The Flames of Hope Trilogy
Book 1
And God said,
“Let there be light,”
and there was light…
~Genesis 1:3
Long ago there was a small kingdom called Ardenta. It was a beautiful land, known for it’s skillful architecture and beautiful scenery. It was a peacefu…[Read more] -
RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @idk
Hi. This is a scene from Guardians Angels. Criticism is requested and welcome.
Nahims sword sang as it sailed towards his opponent. The opponent blocked, swinging its second sword towards Nahim…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Awesome!! I’ll tag a few more of you too.
@stephie @theshadow @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed
OK all, how is this for a story starter? I want to honestly know if it catches y’all attention.
Prologue
7/10/2065
Night had fallen over the capital…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 3 weeks ago
ALTERNATE ENDING!!!
Julius lowered his head, but beyond the taunts of the voice, he could feel something. It was like the warmth of the sun’s first rays creeping into the courtyard. It was a tiny, tiny sliver of peace. Julius found himself looking back at Marcus and Flavia. I was there for them. A voice w…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I do like the ambiguity of the ending, I just wanted to make sure Julius chose right lol.
well, now that there’s two of you saying it and not just one, I feel more inclined to go to go dig up the alternate ending from it’s hiding spot. lol.
It is good thing, it shows that your book has an impact on the reader.
Yay!!! I’m so glad!!
Your…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@theshadow I’ll be here. LOL.
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Stephie replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@esther-c @theducktator @folith-feolin @grcr @theshadow
This is a final call to anyone who would like to make suggestions. Tomorrow we’re going to move on to voting, if I can get to it tonight or tomorrow morning. Otherwise we’ll have to wait another day, because I’m kind of bogged up with summer school. Thanks! 🙂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 3 weeks ago
THATS THE ENDING?! Nononono it can’t be the ending right?! Julius chose to die right?!
Well……. I had a crazy idea to leave it like that with no one ever knowing. However….. I can add one sentence that will change the entire ending and then you would know the answer to that. However, I also liked the unknown ending as well. what i…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 3 weeks ago
So that is the end. I await your reply……….. and possible outrage. lol. However, I have to kick off to do some stuff, so I’ll prob. get back tomorrow morning.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Chapter 16
Julius closed his eyes tightly. How did they do that? How could they face death so unafraid?
Ignatius voice broke in through his thoughts. “They walked out there was taking a twilight stroll. I must admit, the courage of these Christians is impressive.”
Julius felt sick. He could still hear the lion roaring out the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Thank you! I’m glad it was good. I’m also glad it hit hard, because I wanted it to, ya know. Chapter 16 is almost done.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@theshadow Here you go!
Chapter 15
The cheers and stamping of the crowd sounded like thunder above them. Flavia flinched at the sound and clung to Marcus’ hand. Marcus swallowed hard and looked up at the roof above them. He knew the people were waiting up there, feeding their lust for blood and violence on the gladiator fights. From somewhere n…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Sigh, it’s another game of will-he-won’t-he
I know. I just love those. *sighs happily*
I have to brush my sister’s hair, and then I should just about have this next chapter ready for you!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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