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RAE replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@theshadow @keilah-h @princesachronicle22
Silvanis
Once he saw the creature, Silvanis instinctively pushed Fairy behind him. When she tried to step past him, he pushed her back, a pale glow coming to his right hand.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Sniper
“Can we go at it already?” Trevor looked into the woods impatiently.
“Steady, mate.” I held up my hand to stop him from rushin’ forward. “We don’t know its threat level yet.”
The thing growled and stepped into view. It was somethin’ I’d neva seen before–and it was hideous if ya asked me.
It looked like some kinda…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Nope, that works great.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh, btw, you said he has a pistol. Can I have a narrower range. As a person who loves guns I can tell you that “pistol” is not gonna cut it. what model, make, release date, size, and structure?
Maybe simpler to ask would be, do you have a picture of it?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
So Trevor will definitely look like the exact opposite in terms of expression.
lol. I thought so.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
You’re welcome! Happy to help!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
All righty! I will get to work on both of those today!!
so will probably have a smug, confident smile on his face
Hmm, never drawn that before. lol.
Yes please on pics.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@theshadow @esther-c @grcr @freed_and_redeemed
For all y’all who’ve sent me characters, this isn’t just a one shot only thing. If any of you have another character that you want me to draw just go ahead and send the description! My pencil fingers are itching for some more lovely characters!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @rae @thearcaneaxiom @freed_and_redeemed @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @grcr
hello, for anyone who’s been reading the scenes I’ve been posting, here’s another Jonathan/Jim interaction. Jonathan is now 15, making Jim 27.
It was late one evening. Jonathan sat on his mattress and watched Jim, who was shaving with…
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whaley started the topic Character doodles in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Heeeyyy so I am taking free commissions :] This is going to be like any other draw-your-character post – no more people until I’ve finished the last person’s art, please don’t ask for too many drawings, etc – except I’m drawing in a doodle style instead of a fancy sketch.
Behold:
Expect your serious character to have a chubby face 😛 I can do…[Read more] -
Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@princesachronicle22 @rae @theshadow
Sniper
Somethin’ snapped a twig behind us. At first I thought it was a member of the group, but Everi’s “Did anyone else hear that?” told me that supposition was false.
“Everyone, freeze. We have a creature towards the back to the left,” Silvanis, the bloke with the freaky arm, told us.
“So, what’s th…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I have an idea for a book, but I’m not sure if it’s too dark to write about. It was essentially going to be dystopian and where atomic bombs destroyed the major cities of the world, but looking back on it I realized how dark that actually is.
The main message was going to be that no matter how dark the times are, there is always hop…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Just reading over this now. I pretty much agree with what everyone else has said. In the words of Andrew Peterson, “Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to show how beautiful is the prick of light.” Writing something dark is not bad if we use it to glorify God. If you still feel uncomfortable writing about…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Taking some more people who have expressed interest in my story.
@highscribeofaetherium, @grcr, @keilah-h, @theducktator, @theshadow, @stephie, @theloonyone, and @thearcaneaxiom
Again, don’t feel pressure to follow this if you don’t want to/are too busy.
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RAE replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Silvanis
“Trevor’s right. There’s nothing better than getting into a fight.”
Fairy elbowed him in the side but Silvanis didn’t even wince.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Here is the next section.
“Aaron! Aaron, wait up!”
Aaron turned and saw his friend running down the road to catch up with him. “Hello Peter.”
“Aaron, what on earth is going on?” demanded Peter.
“What do you mean?” asked Aaron, leaning against the fence that ran next to the road.
“You,” exclaimed Peter. “You’ve been acting…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Does this take place in the real world, or in a fictional world?
Oh, a fictional world. I thought that was clear with the country names. It’s a fictional world, but the story could have taken place in the real world. (i.e. not fantasy or something like that)
Aaron is 18. Did I not say that? I did in the first draft. whoops.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh that is totally fine. Me being an author, I starting wondering if something had happened to you, and I was hoping that you were ok. lol. I need to quit thinking the worst! haha! Just wait until time allows. Hope you had a fun time at the Lake!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelseiforgot
Ok, so for anyone who read the first chapter. Jonathan’s brother has been taken away to Academy (as was shown) and this is a day or so later. not much happened in that time that would…[Read more]
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