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@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore

I made some edits on the cover after some of the feedback I got.

@keilah-h

Lol, my characters are pretty real to me, and I guessed yours were to you. lololol.

You should totally try that!

@keilah-h

I was just listening to Ron’s theme song and I thought you and Sniper would enjoy it. XD

@theducktator

Lol, it’s still in the works. 😉

@the_lost-journal

those are funny. I just did my own because I was in the car and didn’t have access to my quote folder so I did some from my own book because I knew I wouldn’t accidentally misquote them. XD

@hybridlore

lol. Maybe.

Glad it was helpful!

@hybridlore

Lovely. You disabled copy and paste on the doc. Now I have to do it all the hard way. XD

Okay, feedback answers.

OVERALL

What was your overall impression of the story?

Not sure entirely what you are looking for, but I walked away feeling really excited for the next book and also really refreshed as this is one of my…[Read more]

@koshka

Aw thanks!!!

Would you agree, @power ?

Any suggestions. (besides the odd shapes near his neckline…. which was a reminder for me to clean it up with a brush but I forgot until just now.) and the couple typos already mentioned?

@keilah-h

Possibly, or it could be a different insignia altogether depending on the Sector. I;’m not sure yet. What do you think?

Thank you for the cover suggestions!!!!!

Yes, I found a few typos! Whoops, you found one I didn’t.

Good thing you looked. XD

I already found a typo.

And something wonky is up with his outline…..

@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon      @theducktator     @grcr     @whalekeeper    @power    @hybridlore

Here is the cover of the book. I’m gonna leave this link up for a bit and then take it down.

Any thoughts?

https…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thank you!!

People wanted to know what the insignia on the uniforms was, and it took a bit to design it, but I think I pulled it off.

Glad you like it!!

@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon      @theducktator     @grcr     @whalekeeper    @power    @hybridlore

for everyone who was asking, I finally designed an Insignia. What do y’all think?

@hybridlore

no prob.

I finished your WIP this morning and I gotta answer your questions today too!

@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon      @theducktator     @grcr     @whalekeeper    @power    @hybridlore

I”M HOME!!!!

Now to look at the doc for the first time in weeks!!!!!!!!

Also, as soon as I get the question I posted answered I can start on the next step. 😉

@keilah-h

It’s super funny that we write similar characters at the root, but they are totally different on the surface!

@rae

fun!!

you know, if you don’t want to postpone, then would cancel either. I’d just go with the 1 or 2 friends who can make it. Sometimes a really small group is a TON of fun and it’ll end up being some awesome memories!

For anyone who still reads these…

”what if I fall?”

“you won’t.”

”but what if I do? “

”then it will hurt horribly for a few seconds before lights out. “

”Oh….. that’s comforting.”

“yep! Now get going!!”

Two of my characters:

(MC guy just did something to save MC girl- his new bride- and it was super dangerous.)

girl: “ I don’t kn…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I meant to update you, but obviously I didn’t. Sorry.

@keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @ellette

I did decide on something that turned out to be completely different than my other plans. My family and I went to a zoo a couple weeks ago, on the way, we passed through an area that had tons of…[Read more]

@rae

did you ever decide on a birthday idea??

another one I had that a friend did was getting a bunch of canvas bags and painting/decorating them. Canvas bags can be SUPER useful for all sorts of things and it’s super fun to see everyone’s designs!

@rae

oooo!! Thank you so much!! 😊