TheShadow

@mineralizedwritings Thanks!

@whalekeeper

I just wanna give Lois a hug…

I think Lois would be good at giving hugs

Dante

One corner of Dante’s mouth twitched upwards into a half smile. As much as he wanted to, he did not get this kid. The others were easy. Cal wanted to learn, and he was loyal to Princess Kate and whatever country it was that they came from. Hugo was fri…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Nar

“Kinda like the lines on a warrior’s face. No matter how young, no matter how old, the face shows the stories there to be told.” Nar smiled, brushing a curl from her eye. “That’s the closest I can relate my world to yours. My world is the world of the warrioress, where some go off to war, and come back dead on their shield.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Whaaat? I would never.  *Hides plot idea notes*

@whalekeeper

Nar

“That’s… Unlike anything I’ve ever heard of… ” Nar’s mind wondered what her world would look like if that was the case, it certainly would be crazy. “Does that mean that if I think I’m a bird, I am one?”

@whalekeeper

My world sometimes makes the mental, physical.”

Oh my gosh that is such a cool concept. Stop making me want to read books that don’t even exist yet

@acancello

Oh my goodness!!!!! I am so happy for you, and so proud of you! I am so lucky to get to know you as a friend on here, and I’m celebrating right with you, girl!! You have to let me know how editing/publishing goes!!!

Well, Pitts are explained later in the book, same with Rippak and Godede Waters. I didn’t want to explain everything…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @smiley @esther-c @rae @hybridlore @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @acancello @mineralizedwritings @vinagirl

Okay, I really have been working on this chapter a bunch, and I would like to know you’re guys’ thoughts! I know some of you guys have read this chapter, but I was wondering if you had any…[Read more]

@acancello

I would be such an emotional wreck 😭😭😭 LIKE FINISHING A NOVEL!!! THAT IS SO AMAZING!!

@esther-c

Girl I love Ami and Ev!!! I love Ev’s personality, I wish I had a friend like him XD

1. Were you drawn into the story right away?

I kind of agree with Min, it seemed really abrupt, and I was a little confused at first. But the action also made me want to see what happened next, so it drew me in, but only because I was confused and…[Read more]

@ACANCELLO

OH MY GOSH GIRLLLLLLL!!!! I AM SO HAPPY FOR YOU!!! I LITERALLY FREAKED OUT WHEN I READ THAT YOU’RE FINISHING THE EPILOGUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHH!!! <333

@esther-c

Idk…I just feel like that way has much better writing and is just more emotional XD

if I’m being completely honest here… sometimes hooks are overrated…. 👀😂

lol!

@trailblazer

Aww that was so sweet I love it!!

@esther-c

I may answer all your questions later, but for now, I am drawn into the story.
BUT
I see potential for this story to be better if you had at least one chapter before this that introduced us to daily life with the Orb. It would drawn me in more, and make us care about Ev and Ami more than just plopping them and the plot in our laps off…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Nar

“Yeah, I get that. I mean, you don’t get punished for messing it up, you’re just corrected. If you’re born Realn it’s as natural as walking, and putting your left hand over your heart just feels like a crime. If you’re not…it seems like a bunch of silly rules. Why not use the left hand, your right might be busy?” Nora sto…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, from Nahim’s right elbow down is robotic. I might make it the entire arm.

@keilah-h Lol that’s awesome! It’s always so satisfying when you draw decent hands

@whalekeeper

HAHAHAHA

I snorted so hard when I saw that oh my gosh 😆

*Ahem* Well, in that case:

But hey, at least it’s not like the family tree I created for my warrior cats OC’s…that one was top notch crazy.

XD oh my gosh warrior cats… those books traumatized me

@keilah-h

Lol, I don’t smoke. XD  But I didn’t research it either. I just kinda know? From like observation and watching movies probably