TheShadow

@hybridlore

YAHOO!!!! I LOVE this book SO MUCH!!!

You are amazing girl!!!

Oh man, I am getting so sucked into the story! Wow! Rare that a book gets me like this! WAY TO GO!

@hybridlore

WhAt?!?! They remind you of Sabina and Turin? But they’re so…. different. Okay, i guess I can see where you’re going with that, but Rolf didn’t threaten to stab anyone, and Liesl is extremely sweet.

 

It kind of feels like she’s going to be a love interest for one of them… 🤔

Hmmmm.

@whalekeeper

Darcy and I are complete opposites, but I love him!! He’s one of those complicated characters that just needs some diving into.

@whalekeeper

So it is the relationship cross between Darcy and Aaron, but also the personality. (Though Turin is more prone to kill things than Darcy is.)

@highscribeofaetherium

I don’t know.

That’s when he just walks out of the room from asking Mr. Benet for Elizabeth’s hand…… That might have something to do with it. lololol.

@raxforge

You could head to class…. or burn down the school and fight agents. which would you prefer?

lolololololol.

@hybridlore

ugh!

it’s making me request access again.

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The next morning, both young men were extremely tired. They ate a light breakfast, but neither of them felt like getting up and walking again. Leon decided to lay down and doze for another hour or so, and Julian pulled out the book from J…

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@loopylin

I haven’t even read those and I already think that’s a perfect comparison!

@whalekeeper

@whalekeeper

Yeah, Nahim always wore at least a speeder mask or a helmet for about five years, so that’s probably what she compared him with.

@liberty

OH. MY. WORD.

I die every time I hear that part!!!! OH MY GOODNESS!!! Poor Jarold!

@liberty

oh good. lololol.

The way that he says dunderheaded in the Scottish accent in the drama! Priceless!!!

@whalekeeper

One of my friends compared I think Nahim to someone from Star Wars or something, but idr.

Other than that, i don’t think anyone’s even known enough about my characters to compare them to others. Recently, I only really talk about characters on here or with Andrew. Mainly cuz my friends don’t really follow when I start ranting XD.

@hybridlore

He did, in his way. And he’ll address it again soon enough.

@liberty

WHAT!?!? You don’t like that one? (or are you choking with laughter?)

@koshka

Rory

Rory blinked slowly and looked around him. Where was he? what had happened? For a moment a shock of terror tore through him. Had they caught him:? was this…. His eyes found Leo’s and slowly the events of last night slid back into place. His shoulders relaxed and he looked down. “Sorry.”He glanced at Leo from the corner of his…[Read more]

Whoops tag @whalekeeper

I can only think of one comparison that my friend made a while ago:

It bothered me so much for a long time. I’ve been trying pretty hard to make them different since then XD

@whaley Those are all very accurate lol. I’ve thought of the Lockwood one before but didn’t mention it

@theshadow

Yeppp!!!

@elishavet-pidyon

I liked how you had Neveah try to combat the lie, and it’s obvious it’s for Sef’s sake, not her own. To make this sequence really work, maybe make Sef think her Mani is just trying to save herself – it’s not a lie about Sef, but it would make the former lie hit home. Make her really crumble since the last thing keeping the lie f…

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