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@acancello

Lol! Maybe you should try going to events in your town with your family? Or like I said above, events with friends? Oh! Having a party for no reason at all is also fun!

I’m not trying to push you to do anything you dont want though😊 I just hope you get to meet some real good friends💗 💕 🤗

The problem is…I don’t have very many good f…[Read more]

@rae

This is okay a little bit and in some places (for instance I think it was well-used in the scene where Lilitu was telling Sef his dream) but eventually, and in some places, it just gets annoying and interrupts a read.

Okay, got it! I agree I definitely overused those in this segment.

@whalekeeper

Also about the critique on…

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@freedomwriter76

👍.

@freedomwriter76

Yes, it would help to have the reference pics… I’ve never actually drawn this type of person before. Thanks!

Oh and it could be a week before I have the drawing cuz I’m not the type to sit down and start and finish a drawing all in one day, I take my time and frequently like to return with new eyes to look at it.

@savannah_garce2009

All I have to say is it’s good and I want you to read the article below, especially number 2.

https://storyembers.org/5-stylistic-choices-you-need-to-stop-making/

This is okay a little bit and in some places (for instance I think it was well-used in the scene where Lilitu was telling Sef his dream) but eventually, and in…[Read more]

@rae @mineralizedwritings @esther-c

Here’s a new scene I’m working on. Thoughts? Concerns?

She ran across the prairie. She didn’t know where she was going, and she didn’t care. Running helped her to forget…to forget last night, and all the other nights like it.

“Scream all you want…ain’t nobody gonna here you…” she could still feel the welts…

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@rae

Yep!

@acancello

Heyyy!

Hi!! I’m so sorry I haven’t been on in forever (Maybe its only been like 3 days, but still a long time 🙂 ) So… I have been crazy, crazy busy. Like, I even went to my first barn dance in my new town and there were almost 100 high schoolers🤯 Personally I love to hang out with people so I went without knowing anyon…

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@jonas

all this is hurting my brain!!! 😂 🤣 It’s been a long day…

So why did the Pythonos name it the UNIT? (In this case you might want to make it ‘Unit’ in lowercase, because capitalization usually denotes an acronym.)

Otherwise, you could make it an acronym. I could help brainstorm ideas for that if you like.

Any help would be great. I’m a h…[Read more]

So we’re going with second idea, just the Queen uses the magical house all our characters are locked inside to get to Lillen?

@thearcaneaxiom

Sorry😅 I know how frustrating it can be when you see your brain child measured and prodded as if it were in the UNIT🤣 Your taking it really well though, and even with excitement, so that’s a really good mentality. Your showing wonderful meekness in that way, being open to learning and changing for the better. I would say that y…

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@loopylin

Now the question is, at what point do like Nahim that if he died, would you feel any emotion for him?

And I hope you don’t mind this question, but do have a hard time separating the words Alin and Akin? Do they look exactly the same to you?

Thanks for suggestions! I love suggestions, they always teach me something. 😃.

Do you think…[Read more]

@power

Believe it or not, every one of your posts make me laugh. It would be interesting to meet you in person one day, that conversation could go really good or really bad fast.

I apprieciate your comment very much. I shall be changing that. In fact, I’ve been doing a re-work of chapter one and shall post it here when I’m done.

*materializes out of nowhere*

@whalekeeper

Ik this is a bit off-topic from what you guys are talking about but seriously, I just watched Guardians of the Galaxy Volume III – and it is the best and no one can take Rocket away from me, he is KING

YES. That movie was the BEST. I think a lot of my space comic is inspired by it. And I love Rocket so m…[Read more]

@lydibug

Lol I just realized that Chloe was the one who threw the shoe during the fight XD   I think that was my favorite part of that whole scene.

Also, btw, the girls are really short. Like hobbit sized (3 feet).

What does Chloe look like?

Eddie 

Ed’s eyes sparkled. “Dress shopping? Everyone??”

She turned halfway around, tail whippin…[Read more]

@grcr

Yeah…

There! Finally! It posted!

Part 3:

However, I think the reveal would be a lot more powerful if you set us up for it earlier on in the chapter. I didn’t know before hand that he always had his helmet on. I kinda just imagined him as a normal dude with a normal human face. I think including a description of him, his outfit, and especially his helmet, and then mentioning t…[Read more]

Part 2:

Those eyes had looked straight into his own, those black pupils, red irises and… red sclerae. How could someone of man and elven lineage have such eyes?

This is a really cool reveal that I did not see coming. Now Nahim has suddenly become a lot more interesting and I’m excited to learn more about him.

Ughhh the part 2 won’t post

Part 2:

Those eyes had looked straight into his own, those black pupils, red irises and… red sclerae. How could someone of man and elven lineage have such eyes?

This is a really cool reveal that I did not see coming. Now Nahim has suddenly become a lot more interesting and I’m excited to learn more about him.

However, I think the reveal wou…[Read more]